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Old 03-30-05, 03:37 PM   #1
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From: gutter
Angry off my chest

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we were truethful to eachother in tha begining
but you never made youself useful
so i continued pimpin...............
this aint no fuckin musical you bitch ........you must be trippin
pay attention an listen...?
you where relentless right from the start
tha shit you'ed love to stir up just to eat at my heart...
some of it i understood but fuck bein wit
i lost a few screw's .......includeing friends an family too thanks to you


i left you for reasons that can never be mentioned
you self conceddedin bitterless bitch you desurve to die
i hope we never run into eachother agian,.........
i'll give you one reason why _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _?

.............IM A DO UP A PIECE ON MY EX
SHITS GONE RIGHT FUCKIN OFF THA WALL
CUSTODY MATTERS IS A BITCH..........(FIGHTIN FOR SOMTHIN YOU CREATED)
ILL NEVER UNDERSTAND ,...........YO HOLLA CB83
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Old 03-30-05, 04:11 PM   #2
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yo really good emotion in it but ur structure was all over the place, was kinda short and sorta lost it's flow in places but dont let that discourage u man keep doin ur thang...5.5/10
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Old 03-30-05, 04:14 PM   #3
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chea i waas feelin this good drop fam...................7/10 keep it up fam
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Old 03-30-05, 04:15 PM   #4
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work on your structure thou homie u need to badly
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