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Old 04-03-05, 05:09 PM   #1
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Artist: B1aze aka YuNg FresH Ta DeF
Track Name: Die Tonight Freestyle
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Old 04-03-05, 05:24 PM   #2
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i like this... flow was good. didnt fall off at all... mic presance was there... lyrics were good.. i dont know if it was a free style but it was pretty dope either way.... i like it.... 7/10 id say

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Old 04-03-05, 05:55 PM   #3
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Listening: I used this beat to diss someone at my work it was a good job of me too...but ima go on this...

Hook a lil off key but nice effects used...you sure this is a freestyle it's good lyrics but it feels pre-writ flows good words na this ain't a freestyle i'm sure of it...if it truely is i apologise but it's jus not what you expect from a freestyle no slip ups or stuttering which can be common flow was predictable...nice verse...unconvincing though as a freestyle...keep droppin
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Old 04-03-05, 07:43 PM   #4
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awwww @ the wannabe singing...I beileve this is a freestyle, the beat ain't that fast so it wouldn't be hard to free on this if you been rapping for a while...like that "profilactic" line a lot...liking the hook on this though kyd...overall, good ish, however it's not your best ...
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Old 04-03-05, 08:23 PM   #5
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The Singing part was awful.....You sound sleepy or like your trying to put someone to sleep.....I doubt this is a freestyle but it was good..flow was on point....lyrics cool
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Old 04-03-05, 10:16 PM   #6
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its a industry freestyle...damn...niggas dont buy mixtapes ? geez..thanks for da feed tho
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Old 04-03-05, 11:44 PM   #7
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This is pretty damn hot..but the chorus..shouldn't have sung on that..other then that this shit pretty hot man....keep these tracks coming...
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Old 04-03-05, 11:52 PM   #8
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hate it or love....thas the reaction im gettin over da hook...im glad ya'll feelin the track in a whole
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Old 04-04-05, 04:57 AM   #9
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Old 04-04-05, 04:25 PM   #10
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hot...nuff said...need i say more?.....good ish....respect
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overall - 7.5/10

i defintely wasn't feeling the hook...lol...it was just horrible...as for the verse itself...i liked it...good mic presence...fell off beat a lil bit but hopped right back on it...good voice too...if the hook was alot better i would have liked it even more but it is what it is...stick to rapping and not singing and u'll be good...lol

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