30 bar max....
No Crew voting...
First to 4 votes wins...3-0 is tko...
Lets all hop off tha dicksaddle...and have a nice smooth ride......

Verses due.....by 12 p.m......Tonight....Rapbattles Time......

checkin in ...I'll post later..I'm busy

you takin to long Zion so i'll spit first:

Round 1:

You should teach at tha Circus,you so wack, you got somethin to show-Clowns//I'm on ur elevator of success,but you'll never elevate, so ,~Its about to go Down~//I'm Heavyweight, Ur ~four~ pounds.....with ~three~ Bars....given your ~two~ cents// well ~one~ more word out of you,No ones Buyin, like Green-Cars with Blue-Tents//

WTF?? I'm L.M.A.O when I catch-you//Cuz ur wack bars got everyone here L'in.O.L at-you//.........l.m.f.a.o

see My word play is Perfect to dislay-on-Herbs// given a hand job to wordsworth is Tha only way you'll ever play-with-words//I display more action than Ad-verbs//and serve,Zion becuz he WACK.......//I'm servin it raw,Zion gets mad and says"Take it Back"//......but its to late,
so he takes his meal//Its so raw he ~Throws up~..... Well now atleast, your spitten somethin thats ~Ill~//........

You gonna Pay for misrepresentin~Zion~,without a flow thats-tyte//~BoB Marley~?? your more like BoB Barker...cuz U gonna Pay..Tha Price...its write(right)//........

Beef??f*ck i'll play tha Iron-chef//you say"I-am-Tha-best"//but couldnt hold up, if u had iron-flesh// Count me out?? not even if Albert Einstein was tha ref//and your Girl's tired of Wack..So she stay I.M'en-me-to-death//

*aiight let me take a deep breath*

~Zion~ coulnt shine even if u ate 100 watt lights//Coulnt ~Punchlines~ even if your gloves had pin-stripes//Couldnt be more aqward, if u went to a Pather rally, in all white//your a dude in a party thats full of dykes//you showed that you was *dick*....now all night....You cant find nothin good to ~bite~//

How dare you try to Battle against these 25 bars of raw//You know u aint right...I see your style as more of a southpaw///



aiight thats 25 bars...oyea a southpaw is a left handed boxer fo those who dont know boxing

uppin for Zion..remember there due by 12

yo DeJureThaRaw

i was feeling that post.... i will vote once that other guy drops but shit urs will be hard to beat.. one luv

MEDIC!!MEDIC!! this kid needs assistance and medical attention!!/
I've ripped thru his verse with PERSISTENCE and legible INFLICTIONS!!/
Causing him to fold in submission like loose leafs in sleeper holds/
So u'll never be exposed like weed the way i keep ya closed/
Beat the PRO? I'll have u seeing more rings than a pack of racoons/
only time you coming with heat is blowing hot air in a bag of balloons/
wrapped in cocoons, u still wouldnt deveelop with skills and majestics/
U'll catch more flutters in your stomach reading this verse than butterflies digested/
I've had more hassles with my dick in the event of trying to CARESS IT!!!/
You're pathetic, adn there's no safeguards from me even if over protected/

Should i continue?..(background)HELL fuckING YEAH!!..
(Background fan) Dejur couldnt pump fake even if he played basketball w/ a 12 guage/Zions got too much punches that would REARRANGE DA fuck out of this G's rib cage..
(Another Fan) Obey Zion's sovereignty or watch as ya level of poverty drops/You can find Dejur's verse next to the "Small Pecker Condoms" at novelty shops...
(Crowd:..HAHHAHAHA..)

Ahem Ahem(ick...*pulls out piece of Dejur's moms pubic hair from teeth*


I flip like a key/Lyrically..drug dealers tell me Im Dope/
U cant rock it alone...let alone mkae claims we're in the same boat/
Rappin with no soul theres no chance to revive ya speech/
Ya rhymes deceased, as your vital signs decrease /
You'll be screaming like a HINDHU lyricists" i dont want no BEEF!"/
.Zion.rams javelins in ya abdomen ...so faggot stop ya Babbling
Before I...
mess up both ur FOCAL LENS like STEVEY WONDER n RAY CHARLES battleing.....

Time to end it....

YOU FRAGILE-BOY...I'll disrespect you for -days...You wont get a vote/
Cause rapbattles.com has never showed support to GAYS/
You f**kING HOMO...I should record this ass beatin, and use it for my PROMO/
while you rockin Go=go's at yo=shows wit' lipstick and "soul=glow"/
I EXPOSeD YOU...killed your co*ky talk...and stupid NONSENSE/
And you comin out?...of What...a Booth-or-Closet?
I'll Bruise you OFTEN..spittin Rude-n-Shocken....I'm Losin?...STOP IT/
Cause I'm bad for ya health, I"LL REROUTE YOUR VEINS AND MAKE YA HEART PUMP BLOOD BACK TO ITSELF......

aiight uppin for votes

zions took this battle, had better flow and multis, other boy was hot to, hard to decide but i picked zions

YOU FRAGILE-BOY...I'll disrespect you for -days...You wont get a vote/
Cause rapbattles.com has never showed support to GAYS/



^ hot, thats hot


vote=zion

DAMN ZION HE CAME OUT HELLA HARD BUT YOU STARTED TO FADE OFF AT THE END,,, DEJUR WAS MORE CONSISTANT WITH HIS SHIT... BUT THE BATTLE WAS ALMOST EVEN YET MY VOTE GOES TO DARAW..
VOTE=DejureThaRaw
NICE BATTLE BY BOTH WORD UP FOR REAL...ONE

lol aiight.....vote 1-1 UPPIN

1-1 uppin

votes?

VOTE:deja

PUNCHES:deja
FLOW:zion
MULTIS:zion
METAPHORES:deja
FUN:deja

I think u both came almost same marginal differences in both ya performances. but for me deja had some better lines
"swallowing bulps" was damn funny lol.

peace

2-1 me uppin