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06-17-05, 02:23 PM
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Fakerz
IP: 0DB3 4A20
FAKERZ Seein all the fakers out there, posers for everything. Posers of rappers, posers of Christians, posers of models, of cops, even electricians. When are they gonna wake up, smell the coffee and see they’re stuck? They ain’t themselves, so fess up, be ya self, and then you’ll see much more.. Be honest, don’t pretend, posing is not a friend Its an enemy that lies, a disguise that hides Ya need to check out b4 you check in cuz once ur in the trap, your really sucked in. Wishin you could be someone, if you gonna do it then do it all the way, don’t halfway do it and say Here I am and lie all your way. Posers for Christ, now that’s a steal, a rip off, and they don’t even know the deal. Those heretics, lunatics, unbelieving bastards, when will they come to realize that their end is deadlier? Answer me this all you fakers, are you fake or can you take? Take the responsibility or are you just playin? Are just playin so you can get your sayins? It ain’t rite, no it ain’t true, you need some help You need some rules If you gonna play, go play somewhere else Go play someone else cuz we see who you are you poser, wanna be, take the harder way, peer. You may answer me steadily and even readily but your clothes, your attitude, all point negatively, step back, look in the mirror at who u once wuz You need to go back to that cuz playin church, playin w/ God, playin w/ others ain’t a start
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06-18-05, 03:25 PM
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IP: 2B99 3070
It's good 8/10
but you need to make it rhyme abit more Holla |
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06-18-05, 04:41 PM
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IP: 3450 F354
this is not bad......... i like the overall topic,,, gud selection
....... try rhymin wid slight higher volcab...... overall gd stuff keep elevatin p.s .......... drop a reply to dis plz....... aint got much comments on it yet lol http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195552 <-- clik link |
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