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5 | 83.33% |
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04-16-05, 02:14 PM
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mizz fyre vs drama queen
IP: B196 0ABA
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Topical Battle- Living My Dream 16 - 30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-19-05 at 02:14 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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04-16-05, 02:23 PM
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IP: 1D8B 9B6E
mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 02:23 PM.
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04-19-05, 06:19 AM
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IP: D134 F417
Sat in the chair, despair, mom combing her afro hair
Little girl, seven, wondering why life can be so unfair Mom talking bout a world of opportunities, dreams But incidents crushed a personality that once beamed Growing up, times rough, parents no longer, husband and wife In winter, no sun, she provided the light in her mother’s life Head on her shoulders, always been so full of knowledge At sixteen, education her main goal, she attended college Went through years when the world became a place of anxiety No variety, acceptance was hard for a black girl in our society Every rejection steered her away from her dreams direction On reflection, disappointing, she strived for so much perfection Now a mother, with her own baby, tryna give her the chance To enhance her education, realise everything in advance Never making the same mistakes as she had, having an aim Making her claim, having control of exactly what she became……
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04-19-05, 12:59 PM
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IP: 7D4C 6816
Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-19-05 12:59 PM.
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04-20-05, 03:02 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: F396 2771
Tossing...turning...incapable of getting lost in slumber Worries filling my mind, counted sheep, forgot the number Desperately seeking for harmony and internal peace But the more I try, the more the misery seems to increase No poverty or domestic rage, locked up in a golden cage Freedom restricted, progress blocked, prevented a come of age Silent when I need to scream, living under fascist regime Controlled by heartless fiend, haunting me in my dream ...My dream... . . . . Fluorescent lights glaring down, no more reality around Cruel commands, humiliation, laying naked on the ground On view like monkeys at the zoo 24 hours a day Lost in decay due to those orders I'm forced to obey No daylight! None! No air! None! No darkness! Never quiet! Violence lurking below the surface causing a riot No one has ever escaped through those bullet-proof gates Such frigid sterile environment, caught up in dire straits A gnawing sense of hunger, treated like a thing, not a person Oppressive, terrified to speak for the situation might worsen . . . . Sweaty forehead pounding and ears ringing as I awaken Atmosphere of unparalleled fright I wish I had mistaken But I am indeed imprisoned in this bare society So numb and tortured, slowly destroyed by anxiety Doesn't anyone hear the soft shrieks I'm giving? Anguished for my dream is what I am living
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04-20-05, 03:43 PM
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IP: E5E9 4BCE
aight vote it ya'll.......................................
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04-21-05, 08:55 AM
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IP: 618F D919
vote it up...............................................
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04-21-05, 01:54 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: EEBB 5B0F
Listen to the lady and drop some votes on this!
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04-22-05, 12:56 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 55DA 11D0
Come on! Vote!!! Lolz...its nice read, good topic as well so read!
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04-22-05, 02:14 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: B623 E7E3
Voted For: Drama Queen
oh shit it hot man u killed that man it was all good Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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U WANT TO BE LIKE ME BUT U CANT! IM A RENEGADE I DO IT MY WAY 
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04-23-05, 03:28 AM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Drama Queen
Like Drama Queens really nice was feeling it and kinda put me into story mode Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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04-23-05, 06:57 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 09C1 6A40
Can someone please give fully explained votes? Thank you.
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04-23-05, 12:04 PM
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IP: 43DA 55D8
yeah lol.......like structure, staying on topic............
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04-23-05, 01:25 PM
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Get Cooked Hoe
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: DCF2 D686
Checking the polls yo...............................
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