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Old 04-19-05, 02:44 AM   #1
Spoken Prophecy
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Multi Talented!!

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Frisk me and feel death, got the killa touch 4 fucks that Diss me
ull need a steel chest when my steel flex it steals flesh.. get me?
Im still the best in my eyes and my vision clear like weed 4 cataracts
spoke rattle battle cats matterfact im like a starter pistol how i blast on tracks!

get punished B when spoke drop astonishing hot shit thatll trouble thee
aint no clonin spoke itll take more than a "gun in ya jeans" to double me..!
Fuck! punch 4 punch ali couldnt pummel I or humble me..Spoke boast in concieteness
sting kids where there weakness B kid if they fuck wit me.. I aint G-unit dont show ya Bank tryin to stunt 4 me Spoke C-section niggas buck 50 where there stomach B!

niggas catch a gun butt to the face for tryin to run with Gs.
but keep more wires and tape on them then athletes with fucked up knees!..fuckn snitches i bust at bitches that be itchin to tell somethin wishin to fit in
knowin that they be trickin more than fuckin magicians!
challengers come buck up and get stuck going up shits creek with no paddle
lookin up at feces fallin freely splatterin after ya while u yellin Spokes a Asswhole!

honestly theres none stopin me im possibly the only emcee constantly rockin Peeps
niggas knockin me watchin me chronically jockin and stylin on me..but when they key they mockin ME!
Spoke nifty when he hit keys fuck niggas over faster than quickies then split B..No wonder
I key shit like stevie belive me "niggas cant see me" like front seats in the 60's!

My sixteens be heat seekin searchin ya hotspots like NATO peacekeepin...Mcs retreatin
cuz I got the six tucked u sick fucks and yall like twinkies to Obese Beings, Tempting!
i dont need audio my words flow fine to the eyes ear..why fear juss be real
My keys conceal stealth messages in text youll have to be blind not to hear
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 04-19-05, 02:27 PM   #2
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this was aiight i guess. average wordplay and metas. topic not too original but it got piints for enjoyment value. multis were ok and all that.. i'm just looking for more creativity. too many played concepts within this piece. but keep doin ya thing... peace
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Old 04-21-05, 08:34 AM   #3
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Lol

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this was aiight i guess. average wordplay and metas. topic not too original but it got piints for enjoyment value. multis were ok and all that.. i'm just looking for more creativity. too many played concepts within this piece. but keep doin ya thing... peace


thanx 4 your so called piints for enjoyment! lol
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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