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"I forgive you New York" old shit. MUST READ!
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Blocks of concrete Please...I know y’all heard it all before Dark Streets, littered with trash and children who roam from home that is no home to be hungry Trash and Children Trash and Children Trash Children The latter won’t be discarded God willin' Drug deals gone bad Splattered blood HIV riddled from the drug use that plagues my Harlem haven For the misbehavin’ Me? I’m never clean-shaven Cause its always five o’clock Around these parts As the sun sets on a Great Renaissance We need a Genesis or Perhaps a "Genessance" Statements written in fancy fonts While Pale Faced Aristocrats and Constituents grunt “We will rebuild our city!” What a pity They didn’t notice Until the monster towers were no longer a focus Uptown past 96th Street where the prominent Dare not cross into 110th Street with the hopeless Don't Front But Quote this "Every Town has a 110th Street, whether you chose to notice." Still we all inhale the ashes of those that pass us And now choke us What a burden for one man’s shoulders But I forgive you New York Botanical Sabbaticals Safari’s in the Bronx Bridges built from Brooklyn A majestic municipal named Queens Where my real heads agree with a “Nah mean” Electricity replaces steam engines That roar to the stadium that Ruth built Home of the brave But the brave with no homes Will stand cold and alone As the City puts billions Into Building a State of the Art Dome Remember when the only Bombs in the BX were in pinstripes And now we all look to the heavens in fright At passing American Air-flights “Escape from New York” Who ever thought That a movie would be prophecy Life imitates art...Logically Who needs Nostradamus when you can pay 9 fitty To witness in Surround Sound and digital color The destruction of my city… But I forgive you New York I heard white folks complaining about the inconvenience of constantly flashing a picture ID Now you know a lil’ what its like to be me Shiiii, I got my license tattooed to both front and back of my hand So when I raise them in submission It’s immediately seen by “The Man” Gun Fire, Screeching Tires, An addict getting higher But not necessarily in that order… These streets worship Richard Porter A penny for your thoughts, a quarter To get the Eff away from me! You walkin’ too close I have enough demons chasing me Stop talkin’ in codes! Bumps and bruises Cuts and scars Project parking lots filled with expensive trucks and cars ‘Sittin’ on twenties’ could mean two dimes before parole Now it means chromed out hubcaps that got OnStar cruise control Don’t get it twisted brethren and sisters There’s some beauty to behold Good people, public servants without agendas and kind souls Kids double dutch it up Some go early But such is luck The ones that remain Seem to master the game You took my heart Ripped it in two Spat on what I believed in Candy coated the truth You hurt me, like some many others before But I move on And I forgive you New York yeah, this is old. But let me know your output on this!
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old shit.. just lemme know!..uppin..
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leave you rest'n pz's
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you need a link fam....go post feed n copy the address bar...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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oOO okay.. why is that.. that is a gay rule! lemme find one.
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okay.. here is it.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185626 uppin..
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gotta be honest i disliked the first 8 lines(i think it was 8)..
.when it didnt ryhme i was kinda disturbed...but then it picked up... shit fam, im really feeling some of your vocab...was'nt feeling the overall structure of ya verse...but it actually flowed fairly well considering how choppy it was, this was an interesting read.. get ya structure leveled out n ya flow'll fall right into place.... . yep, im glad i recruited ya... ![]()
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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Yeah, I used to write like that alot. I just wish i can get more feedbask. uppin..
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