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Check in by: 04-11-05 at 11:23 PM

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.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 11:04 PM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 11:13 PM.

Kids Wack thats something that Ray Charles can Gladly see
Merked 10 herbs easily..but Shit..there goes his family tree!
Fuck It...Kids bitch "maid" with nothin but mops and buckets
My Skills He Cant play off like da status of da denver Nuggets
Rookie of the year? anybody can battle their lil sis ten times
Sits in his rockin' chair..jackin' off to one of his Gay men lines
Better pull out the tranquilizer once i end blazes winnin streak
'have 'em cryin in diapers and a soother...dawg are u kiddin me?
but imma end this kid quick................like the future of Nelly
.............but you couldnt drop a "16" if you was fuckin R.Kelly
laughin' at this fagget.......leave 'em with William Hung Teeth
whats that? Rip your eyeballs out m'throw em in the ocean,
.................................................. ...so you can "cum" "sea

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(ight ima show u i aint no average rookie...Heres sum punchs...)

yo
I’ll drop this Dyke Nerd dat Gets cocked smacked in Boy Orgies….
Coz Kon’s Head "Sync's For Woodys" like Tom Hanks in Toy Story...
Wifey Can't Ingest Ur Sackk Fliktz,You Been Snipped by Magic... SHIT,U'd Both Be"Strokin Pussy"like"Dr. Claw In Insperctor Gadget"…
But i'm the more `aViD-ToaSTeR’…
Cuz ya Wife givin' me More-Head than ‘CaBBaGe-GroCeRs’..
The lose u getting you must don't see it ya `LiD-oN-BaCKWaRDs…
i won't Perspire cuz i'll have K Re-TIRE like he failed`BRiDGeSToNe-ClaSSeS…..
U left wit ur ASS-SHoT Surrender To Beef tucking his Rambles like
“Ascots”……
Cuz .K. speech just Pretending To Be Heat like “Miami's`MaSCoT”…
This Faggot Bends, Eats-Dick, Ass-&-Men…..
Shit to me you Still "Posed as a Bitch" like "Victoria's Secert
Manakins"…
I'm Splittin Ya Wit Pistons,striaght Splittin Dis Vet Listen….
Cuz I’ma putting '(4)Clipz In Kon' like a " Video TECHNICIAN"…
^^^^(his audio group four Clipz lol)

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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

vote .K.onfliktz

but imma end this kid quick................like the future of Nelly
.............but you couldnt drop a "16" if you was fuckin R.Kelly

that line got em', tha structure was aight, good enough ta take tha W, coulda been betta though, I've seen betta...

Young Blaze

you had some ok punches, but only few got mah attention, elevate more, your 10-0 fa right now, don't allow ya self ta slip

checkin polls....nice battle..........................

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uppin this battle....................................

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uppin this battle again....1-0 me.......
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Seen better from both of you...

/both verses were a little played in parts..

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

kon...............good flow....god punches........good structure..........opener was good......family tree lol....nice..............next lines wasn t as good but...... starting to nelly line and end to closer.......thatt part of verse was good...........

young blaze........some hard punches....flow wasnt so good..........stucture was bad.........thats hard to read.......try get your stucture to better fit....whatch kons verse........clear verse.......just work with structure and you came better.........still good battle both of you.....
vote:kon for good flow and clear strucure

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upppin this battle....2-0 me............
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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Kids Wack thats something that Ray Charles can Gladly see
Merked 10 herbs easily..but Shit..there goes his family tree!
8...hot opener, shit was funny!!
Fuck It...Kids bitch "maid" with nothin but mops and buckets
My Skills He Cant play off like da status of da denver Nuggets
7...nice line, the meta was dope, 2nd line ok!!
Rookie of the year? anybody can battle their lil sis ten times
Sits in his rockin' chair..jackin' off to one of his Gay men lines
6...gud start but 2nd line...gay shit = played!!
Better pull out the tranquilizer once i end blazes winnin streak
'have 'em cryin in diapers and a soother...dawg are u kiddin me?
7...nice, gud wordplay 'n' shit!!
but imma end this kid quick................like the future of Nelly
.............but you couldnt drop a "16" if you was fuckin R.Kelly
9...LMFAO!!! that R Kelly line was dope!!
laughin' at this fagget.......leave 'em with William Hung Teeth
whats that? Rip your eyeballs out m'throw em in the ocean,
.................................................. ...so you can "cum" "sea
7...decent closer!!

OVERALL: 44/60 (73%)

I’ll drop this Dyke Nerd dat Gets cocked smacked in Boy Orgies….
Coz Kon’s Head "Sync's For Woodys" like Tom Hanks in Toy Story...
8...nice!! Dope Opener with the Toy Story line!!
Wifey Can't Ingest Ur Sackk Fliktz,You Been Snipped by Magic...
SHIT,U'd Both Be"Strokin Pussy"like"Dr. Claw In Insperctor Gadget"…
7...2nd line was dope, not really feelin the 1st!!
But i'm the more `aViD-ToaSTeR’…
Cuz ya Wife givin' me More-Head than ‘CaBBaGe-GroCeRs’..
5...weak line!! structure fucked!!
The lose u getting you must don't see it ya `LiD-oN-BaCKWaRDs…
i won't Perspire cuz i'll have K Re-TIRE like he failed`BRiDGeSToNe-ClaSSeS…..
6...ok!! wordplay is pretty gud!!
U left wit ur ASS-SHoT Surrender To Beef tucking his Rambles like
“Ascots”……
Cuz .K. speech just Pretending To Be Heat like “Miami's`MaSCoT”…
7...gud line, but ure structure still needs work, makes ure flow choppy!!
This Faggot Bends, Eats-Dick, Ass-&-Men…..
Shit to me you Still "Posed as a Bitch" like "Victoria's Secert
Manakins"…
7...2nd line was funny!!!
I'm Splittin Ya Wit Pistons,striaght Splittin Dis Vet Listen….
Cuz I’ma putting '(4)Clipz In Kon' like a " Video TECHNICIAN"…
7...decent closer, i like ure wordplay!!

OVERALL: 47/70 (67%)

Dope Spits From Both!! I think that overall Young Blaze had the better wordplay, but your flow was choppy cuz of ya fucked structure, ya need to work on that shit. Also I thought that Kon came just that little harder with the punches and young blaze had that one real weak line!! Gud battle but Kon takes this!!!

V/ - Konfliktz

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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

votin for K


ight good battle from both of you but ima havta vote for K

explanation:
ight both had nice flow it was easy to stay wit boht your verses the structure was good on boht as well so im given props to boht of you on that.
Punches both had punches but K's was alot harder then Blazes

blaze i wasnt feelin u usin movies for punches i mean inspector gadget or w/e nah fam wasnt feelin it at all it was creative but not hard enough

K- ya punches were to the point and creative as well i like ya punches man.

Both need to elevate on some personals n some multies i didnt see any of either n ya verses

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