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Old 04-13-05, 08:34 PM   #1
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suicide is more than just an act

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im commin faster than a rock thrown from a sock to knock your block to rock and shock your clock tikken in your head nigga he ain't sleepin he emotionally dead i leave him dased and confused scard a bruised sence the age 8 he has been abused but noone noticed no one even cared maybe sence hes dead some one will look and stear and maybe remember friendship they could have shared he was always put down bullied and thrown around then he snaped back with ak and ten rounds and end with himself when all you had to do was be a friend or give some help noone seen it commin noone new there fate or how much that lil boy held inside full of hate who ar we to rate and debate if the boy was insane angry or irate maybe with some friends it would came out better now he lays six feet deep in damp and snowwy weather or not you believe the facts things could have been different with 1 persons kind act collumbine would have been insoficiant
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Old 04-13-05, 08:39 PM   #2
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ummmm some of tha rhymes r simple....change ya format...so wen can get tha full affect of ya rhymes n metaz
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Old 04-13-05, 08:42 PM   #3
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yo i know what u meen by this piece but watch ur structure,if you need help pm me
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