http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182666
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182769


follow me...tryin a new style early

Chaos..confusion..illusions formin kayotic conclusions..
Misusin proven resolutions..eludin ya dubs so u focused on losin.. (dubs=W)
No excusin my notions..bars "stiffen" brains till all knowledge is frozen..
Unfoldin out in da open..bodies "recycled" like "semen" after explodin..
Discover my words..unavoidable herbs like salad ordervz.. {cant spell it}
PreZ defeated? ubsurd..u nerds occur to "erupt" like an uncontrolable urge..
Disturb da God?..bullets like parents alwayz know where u are..
Incesive scars..gun on da waist like da moon..its never too far.. {ha}
Shoot outs..lungs splattered In Yardz..disregard my venemous charge..
Expandin large portions of "blood" like sketchin a "menstral collage"..


^? I Kauze ? ^

it'z nice...vocab was there...structure was on point...meta's were good 2...multi'z r here...i'll say overall it was 9.0/10 very good work keep it coming just make it a lil longa next time

good lookin on da post....preciate it son

i posted dis on march 20th.......people respond 2 it.......lemme know wat u think about it.......say whateva u have too lol