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Life is a Constant Battle
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yo its from ve3 semis topical piece-"Unbalanced World"
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dont want the piece to go to waste so give me a critique i got some ups on the piece so give me what ya think....
Unbalanced world There was a planet and god created life There was a adam and god created wife So pure after a million of jurrassic and death So sure before a villian of terroric hand depth A fruit produced to kill that what was created a tooth engulfed to vile which almighty hated curiousity and stupidity lead to death and disease animosity and nudity lead to self fire and no cease That which we relied of life turned to slave for life That which we allied for life turned to made for knife Man turned to group turned to city turned to state Politic turned group friend to enemy foed to hate Nature turned shelter to mature for home to make Nature learned skelter to rapture for throne to take Metal tool for make of tool for war tool left horrible scar Mental fool for sake of rule for war fool left terrible war Animal new to extinct juvenile turned adult for precinct Denial grew to distinct senile maned fault for excrement The worm birthed from the apple had destoyed surface to core The germ birthed from shrapnel had estoyed mallace to gore--(estoy-to be) Evil and corruption gaining weight on the planetary tetertauter vile and consumption waining fate on the evolutionary mentor Talk turned communication turned envious and gossip progression write turned conversation turn email-us and hate it no stagnation Unbalanced world of demonic message within love and strength unbalanced world of horrific homeage within good and faith Let this world find that path and forgive each other for wrath Let this problem find the math and derive each other for half Till then the sea is soughter and god berthed a demonic angel for daugther till then the blood is water and we frogs maybe mechanic pawn for faughter
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