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Old 08-03-02, 04:25 PM   #1
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masterlock

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the key to life is love, and id love to have your key,
your my masterlock, to imprison my misery.
the key to life is love, and id love to have you key,
your masterlock, holds tighter, and locks away my dreams,

Are you pretending, to like me for me,
you dont love me, its more then likely,
more then slightly, i love you more then lightly,
its biting, leaving holes of hate inside of me,
its untidy, its amazing how you mistify me,
untie me, and take a seat beside me,
define me, you kill all hope of us, suicidely,
dont lie to me, dont act like a child to me,
should be easy to see, your loves playing hide n seek,
our loves the sky to me, never ending, but i scare you with just the sight of me,
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Old 08-05-02, 01:48 AM   #2
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nice use of ya vocab..i liked this piece...b/c the way you worded it...it gave it more....don't know why peeps sleeping...but this was good..much luv..God bless.1...
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