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04-23-05, 01:31 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Intro: Hellbound Verse
IP: E9AE A873
My rhymes when their written still appeal to illeterates
Every little bit of all the shit i spit is infinite The number of people I've broken and chopped into pieces Is endless like the number of posthumorus Tupac releases Deceased but still breathing through a feeding tube artificially Doomed to a life of blinking and twitching incoherently Cheery screeching down the freeway into a searing pain Freezing rain, speeding through the angst by smoking Mary Jane In moderation I can be taken without serious complications As long as it's at a ration level that doesn't cause chest pain Vainly trying to retain memories I need to sustain In order to quell the pain that's plainly driving me insane Inane, going the wrong way down the wrong lane Leading the cops on a high speed chase through multiple states Facing felony charges, from grand theft auto to larceny I know I'm going to hell so someone's coming along with me (written to the Hellbound beat) Last edited by sertman : 04-23-05 at 02:10 PM. Reason: spelling |
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04-23-05, 09:14 PM | #2 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 066B 8BBA
come on don't sleep on this
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04-23-05, 10:35 PM | #3 | |||||||
ready 4 wuteva
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IP: F4E8 B1DD
decent drop...lyrical content couldda been better n ya structure needs work. mentioning pac in that context tho.......not cool. neva eva eva do shit like that cuz cats out here'll give u tha least respect on dis site. respect & power's wut it's all about. once u get used 2 everything shit'll be almost natural...check out tha tutorials n elevate and MAYBE.......MAYYYYYYBE one day u can try out for Emericas Finest.....1
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04-24-05, 01:01 AM | #4 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: D6BE 87D8
Weerd...Stay up and elevate man...Keep at it...1
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