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Old 08-30-05, 02:57 AM   #1
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Unperfected Knowledge

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Unperfected Knowledge
To advance with a profound soul of greatness,
Convicted in the junctions..
To predict shame, or learn frustration from it,
When the decision is the function..
So you proceed with a keen sense of dignity,
Commotion has its surrounding..
Such depth in justice, found with mentality,
And giving up without rebounding..
Retaliate with force, embellish in it’s agony,
So smart, it’s literally lethal..
Never pathetic, but maintaining its own tribute,
Such evil its facts relate to people..
Creating pain and sorrow, by connecting directly,
Compounded in fierce walls..
Heavenly struck, such violence is silent to hear,
Education with such falls..
The ghetto eventually was served it’s hesitation,
Never helped, never penetrated..
Pours of tears fall, crawling up the mistreated,
Unable to figure the self debated..

Caught up in myths, it’s reason was unheard..
To give all for it, it’ll give you,
Is all that I ask of you, please give out your word..
Cause it lives for all that’s true,


Generated in it’s own desperation and solitude,
Prosecuted from it’s attitude..
Presented as a living being, with it’s own feeling,
So Christ could hand out gratitude..
A disaster no one could handle, unfortunately,
Knowledge itself couldn’t bare..
Versatility and its scare, tainted by the hatred,
This dynasty built by it’s snare..
I wondered was gods mind possessed with evil,
Trapped in it own grasp..
Unable to last in a factor, death was to fall upon,
All who stratified it gasp..
In it’s time, education was situated a wreck,
Protection had its addiction..
Let this nightmare end, selected by the worse,
At level, yet above friction..

Caught up in myths, it’s reason was unheard..
To give all for it, it’ll give you,
Is all that I ask of you, please give out your word..
Cause it lives for all that’s true,


Eventually this terrorism was viewed as such realism,
Tarrying through the visions..
But still granted possession, this session was soon over,
Yet he still had some decision..
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Old 08-30-05, 03:29 AM   #2
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wow this was a good peice would you like to collab on an open mic?
good emotion vocab structure wow good drop
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Old 08-30-05, 04:10 AM   #3
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props to you good imageery vocab
one of the better peices ive seen
and i dotn even like poetry btu thsi was good
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Old 10-07-05, 01:09 AM   #4
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thanks for the feed willa, ima up this.
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Old 10-07-05, 05:35 AM   #5
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