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...E... 0 0%
Daubs 5 100.00%
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Old 04-29-05, 12:54 PM   #1
Daubs
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From: Salford
Daubs vs ...E...

IP: 828D 0B7A

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6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Old 04-29-05, 12:58 PM   #2
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...E... has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 12:58 PM.
 
Old 04-29-05, 01:00 PM   #3
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 01:00 PM.
 
Old 04-29-05, 01:03 PM   #4
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obviousely keyed...2-3 mins verse..

You had "one shot" to accept this, but at first ya chose to reject it..
Saw ya user title and avater....aint it time you got off ems dick!!

I personally dont think i should scare you, but obviousely my rhymes do.. ..E.. sounds kinda like a hallucination pill, so i got reasons to pop you!!

Eventually accepted.......but begged for only 6 lines..
Crooked like a pirate.........so i bet he spits blind!!


avatar and title both relate to em,click links and E pills, asked for only 6 lines.

came weak as fuck, but should be enough to beat him...
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Old 04-29-05, 01:07 PM   #5
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yo...yo...yo....listen this daubs...

this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...
thats mens sperm u suck mens dick like ur wifes do...
iv seen urs and mads verse and thats bad,u have that,
rhymes like my ass lack,talk to smash crap,i slash back...
Like u piss me whach ur metaphores,
diss me ye watewa whore.....
 
Old 04-29-05, 01:09 PM   #6
...E...
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got 7 lines cauze i could get that last fit in....and if u give me more time and lines i can drop more....
 
Old 04-30-05, 03:50 AM   #7
...E...
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....yo....uppin this....................votes...........
 
Old 04-30-05, 11:02 AM   #8
...E...
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yo....uppin....................................... ........................
 
Old 04-30-05, 07:15 PM   #9
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppp
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Old 05-01-05, 01:02 PM   #10
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up to the top of this shit, get some votes poppin !
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Old 05-02-05, 03:19 PM   #11
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upppin............................................
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Old 05-04-05, 05:19 PM   #12
King Solo
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Voted For: Daubs

You had "one shot" to accept this, but at first ya chose to reject it..
Saw ya user title and avater....aint it time you got off ems dick!!
5...not a real gud opener, but not too bad!!
I personally dont think i should scare you, but obviousely my rhymes do.. ..E.. sounds kinda like a hallucination pill, so i got reasons to pop you!!
6...decent, gud meta and ya got links!!
Eventually accepted.......but begged for only 6 lines..
Crooked like a pirate.........so i bet he spits blind!!
5...weak closer!!

OVERALL: 16/30


this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...
2...wtf!!! is this considered a punch!!
thats mens sperm u suck mens dick like ur wifes do...
iv seen urs and mads verse and thats bad,u have that,
1...wack, makes no sense!!
rhymes like my ass lack,talk to smash crap,i slash back...
Like u piss me whach ur metaphores,
diss me ye watewa whore.....
1...just plain wack!!

OVERALL: 4/30


weak battle........E came wack as fuck and structure was gay and lines weren't even punches. daubs came weak to had one decent bar but overall killed this fool with ease!! both need to elevate on punches and shit, get creative, put in mutlies, better wordplay n shit!!!!

V/ - Daubs

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Old 05-06-05, 07:18 PM   #13
MiSk
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Voted For: Daubs

...E...
this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...

^^^^that was your best line^^^^
besides that everything else was bad.... sorry



Daubs
1st line- good wordplay...good personal
2nd line- funny as hell...good personal...good hit
3rd line- hahaha...hard hit good closer

Vote: Daubs


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Old 05-06-05, 07:36 PM   #14
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sorry let me explain in more detail...

-Daubs-
You had "one shot" to accept this, but at first ya chose to reject it..
Saw ya user title and avater....aint it time you got off ems dick!!
^^^^ 9/10 hot opener... good personal

I personally dont think i should scare you, but obviousely my rhymes do.. ..E.. sounds
kinda like a hallucination pill, so i got reasons to pop you!!
^^^^ 8/10 kind of self glory... but funny as hell, good hit

Eventually accepted.......but begged for only 6 lines..
Crooked like a pirate.........so i bet he spits blind!!
^^^^ 8/19 haha...funny as hell, goot hit, good closer

25/30 = %83


-...E...-
yo...yo...yo....listen this daubs...

this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...
^^^^ 5/10 your best line but could of been better

thats mens sperm u suck mens dick like ur wifes do...
iv seen urs and mads verse and thats bad,u have that,
^^^^ 4/10 not feeling this at all... sorry

rhymes like my ass lack,talk to smash crap,i slash back...
Like u piss me whach ur metaphores,
diss me ye watewa whore.....
^^^^ 3/10 doesnt make sense... and is that a 7th line in a 6 line battle?

Vote: Daubs



**just honest opinion**



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^^^^^^need some honest votes^^^^^^
 
Old 05-06-05, 07:37 PM   #15
Mad Dog
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Voted For: Daubs

I think that Daubs got this battle because i feel that Daubs came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Daubs got it was effective and was on point ...E... you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Daubs good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Daubs and flow and structure i'll give to Daubs.

V/Daubs RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed
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