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Old 05-07-05, 03:13 AM   #1
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I'M STRAIGHT FROM CALI, FULL OF BLOODS AND CRIPS..
PULL THE TRIGGA ON A NIGGA, NOW WATCH AS MY FAVOURITE COLOR DRIPS..
NIGGAS GOT BULLETS IN THEY BODY, WHILE I GOT BULLETS ON MY CLIP..
ANOTHA NIGGA IS SLAIN, CUZ HOMEBOY WAS A CRIP..
BODY ON THE ASPHALT, MY GUN STARTED A D.N.A. FLOOD.
CALL MY BULLETS VAMPIRES, AS THEY BE THIRSTY FO BLOOD.
WEAR THA WRONG COLOR, THEN YA SURELY GON DIE..
ADD UP THE DEAD CRAB TO MY STATS, ANOTHA MAMA WILL CRY..
IF YA REALLY FROM THA STREET, YA LET YA GUNS TALK..
YA DESERVE TO DIE, IF YA A BLOOD THAT DOES THE CRIP WALK..
BLUE IS THROUGH, HAVEN'T YALL HEARD THAT BEFORE..
I SQUEEZE THE TRIGGA ON MY GLOCK JUST TO SETTLE THA SCORE..
I'LL WATCH A CRAB BLEED JUST FO ME TO BE SATISFY.
MOVE AN INCH THEN I'LL PUT COUPLE OF HOLES IN BETWEEN YA EYES..
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Old 05-07-05, 03:40 AM   #2
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okay wow....this was wack....really wack....u need to elevate alot...flow was horible...structre was ight...rhymes were real basic... and the first bar was bitten...comw with orignal shit...this gang bangin rhymes are stupid they dont mean shit....work on ya shit man
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