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04-30-05, 03:07 AM | #1 | ||||
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You ain’t no a phenom prophet that feeds on obnoxious
Emcees’ psalm products as I spree on topics Leave ya'll option less like freaks gone gothic In beach palm tropics where I bleach dawn spotless Coming beyond logic with un-written remains, driven insane claim you conflict with my aim, you'll stricken with shame I’m hitting, splitting and then crucifixing the game Cause I’m sickening & unforgiving as the name rescripting King James With lynching and pain and every inch is ingrained To the brink of the brain and if you think you’re insane I’ll sort a whole biography of your boring souls topography For re-recordable technology in deemed normal etymology I’m penetrating benevolence, my presentation devastatin' the residents In an excavation of tenements and degeneration of sentiments while Desecration of reverends and resignation of presidents is irrelevant Due to the Declaration of Infection regulating with pestilence At your inaugural address of no applaud able specs Or plausible respect and I have an audible contempt But I’m still a humble writer as much as ghosts in Riker’s rumble the type too pummel, & crumble flows as I run through this hyper jungle With a bunch a’ bundled vipers to spite you’re lighter jumbles like you’re stumbling for lighters in air flighted tunnels And as I burn down this derby with fire and flames there'll be no one higher too blame inspired by pain, ya not fuckin' worthy, FUCK a jersey! I’ll retire the game Here is my link......
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04-30-05, 03:09 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 0178 DF64
Now uppin. I'll RTF....
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04-30-05, 03:13 AM | #3 | ||||
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Nice Drop Hommie.. Pretty Tough Vocab... But Overall it was a good read..Keep Dropping....
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04-30-05, 03:23 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 0178 DF64
well I'm actually getting love from you. Back at ya.
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04-30-05, 01:00 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: FA19 43EC
Uppin jeez. Why do I get slept on?
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04-30-05, 01:48 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
Well this was an iight peice.. i was really feeling it. It had some nice punchlines Some were fillers but it was okay. Alittle short..*Reds hard to read, hate red* you had nice wordplay, and good vocab ... Structure was good next time try to match up your bars Overall nice drop keep it up, seen alot better
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05-02-05, 06:00 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: F72B E7D1
weerd uppim.....
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05-02-05, 08:15 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: F72B E7D1
yo uppin.......
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05-03-05, 06:00 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 45A3 A79F
uppin you whores......
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05-04-05, 12:16 PM | #10 | |||||
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IP: 928B 1485
this was grimy...I think it was illness...the vocab was "bleeding with complexity" and the flow was "poisoned with sickness"...good drop...keep stingin them peices man...
and return the favour..."MY ABC's" it's in here somewhere...
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05-04-05, 03:03 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: ED12 F9A8
uppin and thanx....
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05-05-05, 10:18 AM | #12 | |||||
unknown legend...
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IP: 0F40 8178
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05-05-05, 04:27 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 41E7 D5CF
uppin this shit.
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05-08-05, 01:14 AM | #14 | ||||
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IP: 794F ADD9
uppin you fags...
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