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1x to the joint
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want critique on this:
So you wanna be a star??.. let me make you blink have thoughts of throwing winks at god... for an asylum; cause if he fall to hell.. you know i'm gona find im let me know wat u think??
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IP: 8B7B DE28
not bad at all!
2nd line could of been worked a little better... don't get me wrong i'm still a newbie on here... just giving honest option |
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critique this....
IP: 8B7B DE28
give me some feedback...
just a short little punch... Your from the "Dirty" ya aint so fresh and clean... ya texts are so "thrownback" got me thinkin' ya got a "time machine" |
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IP: 8B7B DE28
Radizaim your flows are weak they my head hurt,
got me thinking you gave me a brain "aneurysm" sorry man, no hate, your fam, that wasnt even a good hit... give me a hit back when you get a chance |
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aight ,aight catch it ........
![]() your flows like H2O "hot-to-off", just a second rate nock off in the front line hide the "self" don't want ya essence in the presence of a menace strip ya soul to adolesence
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IP: 6645 381F
ya thinking your gonna take this win, nigga i'm "native" to this son
this ain't a "rain dance" its called beating you in this battle like a "war drum"
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IP: 6645 381F
^^^ your lost post Radiziam was hot
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hip-hop aint been the same since Tupac moved to Cuba on us! |
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Haha Funny .....................
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