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05-15-05, 03:33 PM
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Neon Lights- Dope Or Nope?
IP: 28AD 5545
This was my verse for my battle in the Leagues...took about twenty minutes.
Neon Lights .:: Slivers above me shine like the blankets of stars, hiding beyond clouds, ::. .:: crescent moons turned sideways from afar, staring with cynical frowns. ::. .:: I see mottled hands falling from the night, groping for my hesitant form. ::. .:: Lids close over my sad eyes, full of fright, sensing my escaping warmth. ::. .:: I can't scream for help, my once-huge cavern pinching my young sides. ::. .:: I'm usually supplied with my own needs --- lately it's been a smooth ride. ::. .:: My eyes are still closed, and I can feel the back of the searching hand, ::. .:: Never have I felt so exposed... seems life never goes exactly how you plan. ::. .:: I can remember the harsh lights, staring down at me like surrounding suns. ::. .:: Claustrophobia coming, the walls so tight...holding me, giving no room to run. ::. .:: A feeling of plastic, hands gingerly holding on, trying to rip me into the heat. ::. .:: I struggle, but mercilessly I am drawn, my worldy transaction almost complete. ::. .:: And so many eyes are watching forever, staring to see my confused reactions. ::. .:: I can feel my connection to my mother severed, just another simple distraction. ::. .:: A stranger is holding me... cradled in his giant arms, I feel like I'm choking to death. :: .:: The foreigner ignored my pleas as I struggled for every single one of my breaths. ::. .:: He stares into my eyes, with a comforting look as he raises a plastic glove, ::. .:: The man spanks me, making me cry... what a bastard, I ball my fist and strike above. ::. .:: The foreigner ignored my pleas as I struggled for every single one of my breaths. ::. .:: He stares into my eyes, with a comforting look as he raises a plastic glove, ::. .:: The man spanks me, making me cry... what a bastard, I ball my fist and strike above. ::. Copyright @ Crazy Hades <^> Eat me 2005 |
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05-15-05, 04:25 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 28AD 5545
Uppin'............................................
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05-15-05, 04:40 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Oops... <<.............
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05-15-05, 06:47 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Dont forget a link please or this will be closed
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The Competition
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05-15-05, 06:58 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: D4E8 9B65
[QUOTE=Kein Witz]
Copyright @ Crazy Hades <^> Eat me 2005 whats this for? |
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05-15-05, 07:04 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
I was bored. o_O Could you give some feedback?
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...152466&posted=1 Last edited by Kein Witz : 05-15-05 at 07:11 PM. |
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05-15-05, 08:01 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Meh. Uppin' this piece.
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05-16-05, 04:11 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin'. Maybe this should be moved to Poetic Scriptures?
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05-16-05, 05:14 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 0825 899A
<< Uppin' some more.
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