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05-25-05, 08:05 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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Black Dragon feat. K-Noxious - Struggles wit da Pen
IP: B31E 3028
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192310
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191390 -------------------------------------------- this is juss a collab wit my S.I.C. crew member from my city........and da beat is by my homeboi Proper-T........if ya want to buy any of his beats check out his site: www.soundclick.com/bands/8/propertmusic.htm http://rideinconline.com/play.php?b...&mode=song_hifi or http://www.rideinconline.com/bands/466/ 'preciate u listenin and any feedback is welcomed............. pz ~1~
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05-25-05, 10:30 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: B31E 3028
ya'll dun sleep on this.........
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05-26-05, 10:59 AM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: C706 1447
YO Uppin this.............................................. .........
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05-26-05, 07:08 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 7402 AF51
Listening...
Im feeling this beat...Pretty emotional Vocals need to be turned up a lil bit...Quality isn't all that...Lyrics are decent, but there is alot of room for improvement. Flow is slow... 5/10 |
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05-26-05, 10:06 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: B31E 3028
'preciate da feedback fam........
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05-26-05, 11:25 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 7E31 13C3
beat is diff, i dont like it doe
quality needs to be upped, beat volume needs to go down Flow is really bad.. i see how u wanna flow, but it aint working delievery is really boring, not very enjoyable to listen too. Lyrics are very basic. and you lines are too short, you pasuing unnessecary Same for the hook, not too good 2/10
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05-27-05, 12:27 AM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: B31E 3028
thanx fo da feedback.......................................
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05-29-05, 04:07 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 1D91 FE8A
yo uppin this.............................................
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