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06-01-05, 12:58 AM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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...Acuity - Birth...
IP: 73E3 A2A2
Birth Of A First Child As the essence of my loins is moulded by nature into an entity No pen has the ability to effectively describe the emotion welling within me One night's passion has resulted in climaxed in the birth of a child Its unreal, the physical scienec that has made my angel gabriel Its unknown, underestimated, undisclosed are parternal feelings One assumes what is right like the philsophys of David Hume is the love of a mother That only maternal instincts have meaning, That fathers r simple vessels Vessels that function to insure continuation of life, due to animalism and lust The things I took for granted and dismissed as persistant, such as air and vitality I take seriously knowing every moment on this plane is blessing on me So I vow, never to allow myself to father this seed wid neglect and scorn Because, the lord, has givin me infinite joy in the conception of this angelic boy When my baby was born and I stared into its eyes, I did nothing but cry Cried: oceans of tears that raged across landscapes and watered soil Created fertility from a soul baron, Gave life in its passing to a new man One who truly fears God, thinkin he may take away my lifes point, my lifes star .I have eternal undieing love, affection, compassion, adoration for the vector That enabled light to shine in my world, that gave me a second powerful wind Her efforts, her toil, mentally and physically is a feat that could never be forgotten That is why I cherish her as much as the child she has bore I never knew how, I could be changed forever by a miraculous smile Until I witnessed the effervescent glow of the birth of my first child . -Acuity-
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06-01-05, 03:45 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
DAMN...Deep stuff right here. It's obvious that tha strongest part of this piece is the emotion. You made me understand your feelings and how strongly you felt. This was a refreshing piece.
Overall 10/10 Fav lines: When my baby was born and I stared into its eyes, I did nothing but cry Cried: oceans of tears that raged across landscapes and watered soil Created fertility from a soul baron, Gave life in its passing to a new man RTF on tha poem in my link...please |
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06-03-05, 08:07 AM
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IP: BCCF 31BC
word bumpin....
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