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6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-29-05 at 11:00 PM

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Phillyhaze69 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 10:03 PM.

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 10:07 PM.

barrz of stell u are so surreal/u a cracka microphone blasta/i seea ya in tha club u a fool u can't even 1,2 step/dawg u call ur shit a dance u a gangsta/hell i know i ain't all i do is pull up my pant and lean back cause my shit bac/when u spitt ur shit its a dud every1 in da club sniff there nugg!

ok im not even gonna try

Im the sickest, written or not everytime I'm spittin its hot
Im the shit when I drop, you're just shit when you drop
He says he's real but this queen's fake, this kid will never be great
Cuz the best thing to come from Philly..................is cheesstake
This kid's weak, emcee? kid you need to get out of hip-hop
Cuz just because your breath stink, it dont mean that you spit hot

key'd I know its wack, but should be more than enough

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.


Barz Enough Said He Came Way Harder And Better, Lmao!

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Um T.T.I

thanx bro uppin this shit thru the roof............

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

man, barz of steel got this easily, came with real punches....and had better structure, better everything....other dude, just keep working at it, you should be able to get a hold of things, keep up man

v/barz of steel....RTF plz

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.


Flow-Barz.......structured verse nicely and philly haze had stretched lines.

Punches-Barz........Because Philly had none.Just 6 lines of a bunch a bullshit.

Personals-Barz.........only personal was cheesecake one and that was weak.Philly had none.

Multis-Barz..Philly had 50 cent style.Just one syllable rhyming.

Vocab.-Neither........but of you guys suk when it comes to vocabulary.

Originality-Barz...although some elemantary bullshit there like breath stinks.But philly had no punches.

So nice jjob Barz....merked a noob.Must feel real special now huh?Faggot.

Vote-Barz(vote in link below or I'll have this vote removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Aii Breakdown

B.O.S
Im the sickest, written or not everytime I'm spittin its hot
Im the shit when I drop, you're just shit when you drop
????? WTF? Man Self glorification and then you turned around and jus said Im the shit when i drop and you ar ejus shit when you drop ???? aint that the same thang?

He says he's real but this queen's fake, this kid will never be great
Cuz the best thing to come from Philly..................is cheesstake
better Nice Wordplay
This kid's weak, emcee? kid you need to get out of hip-hop
Cuz just because your breath stink, it dont mean that you spit hot
....wack....played...

Overall man You Drop a wack verse really and you said so yourself but it was enough to take the win i mean you dropped the only punch in this battle so LOL

Philly
Philly ohaze I cant breakdown your verse lik i did his bcuz your verse was sloppy with the structure and teriible with the rymes and You Really need to elevate and work on correct punchez man overall you are really bad

my v/ BOS

lol i didnt try, gimme a break

uuuuuupppppp

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how u gon diss philly =[ i'm from philly an i'm not whack lmao don't feel like explainin my vote so i'ma leave feed back i think barz got this but one tip try not ta self glorify when you battle not sayin u did it a lot but jus sayin

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jus ckuz ur new to a site don't mean ur a newb period....he even said in one of his threads that he been rappin since '03

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