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05-20-05, 08:33 PM | #1 | ||
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COWARD: FEAT Atticus * STRIGHT FIRE *
IP: CCE7 12CD
~atticus~
Hours Of Power Empowered As Bush Pushes Down Our Towers Now We're Jet Flyers-Fighters Poundin Our Cowards Higher Fist As He Grins At These Scenes It Seems He, Begins To Claim Its To Break Terrorists Takedowns And Somehow The Backlash Seems Slim. TO MANY FUCKING COWAAAAAAARDS!!! They Up As Downward We Seem To Bleed. Flip, Spin, Tip Toe The Globe Fallow The Road To Connecticit Edicate Misused News Outa Porportion For Consent Ofa Death Of The Last Breath From A Sadist Rapist, Hatereds Grasp Clasps Around Ross Now Sadomy, Odd How He's Forgot Deaths Past. Passed It Off Past His Vanity Lost, Free Thought Handles He And Nobody Thought This Manic Freak Could Be Freed Simply By Plea Of Insanity. TO MANY FUCKING COWAAAAAAARDS!!! We Ajust, And Now We're Just To Blind To See. ~confidential~ theres to many cowards, making it known they fake and faker...... acting stunt'in hate'in.............. but life go's on theres no waiting........... what im gonna do is SHOW these cowards they NEW MAKER..... commotions approaching quoting ya midwife upon birth "this'll get ugly" I impose blows crushing ya bones like dwarves with osteoperosis in rugby trust me, trying to reach for my level with balderash you'll fall and crash land get left mashed in garbage cans,bitch no need to call home call the trash man to many cowards another birth every hour who ya parents? ya tierd life needs to end, so when i "bust" it'll help like i was making "a-pprent" most my quotes goes from coast to coast to strike at you directly while your text could inject me with exstacy and still not likely affect me COWARD... "wanna battle?", ya shit doesn't flow, first pay a plumber I'm the ray of thunder you're under and like calendars ya days are numbered Poke out these cowards optics so that these bitches can look hard Leavin ya ripped and broken bondage, like when John Smith fucked Pocahonatas! ya cowards needs 2 stop rape'n ya battle keys, all your punches are forced and, It's night night cause I kill more new bee's than yellow jackets practicing abortion! theres to many cowards, making it known they fake and faker...... acting stunt'in hate'in.............. but life go's on theres no waiting........... what im gonna do is SHOW these cowards they NEW MAKER..... YO FUCK these COWARDS yo ATTICUS WE OUT FUCK'EM ALL..... P.S *making it apprent aka making a parent get it? *
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05-20-05, 08:51 PM | #2 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: D5AB 74BE
decent, wouldve liked to see both pieces mingle more..
this collab was just from way to diferent angles,.. it really didnt jive together...shouldve tried harder on that content was aight, atticus had a real poetic feel while con you were focused on a battle style drop.....pz
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-20-05, 08:54 PM | #3 | ||
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IP: CCE7 12CD
no dout i feel what u saying but its like a diss to every single coward out there so i focus on them as if i was battling them cuz i tryed to shit on them and battling is a nice way to shit on them dont u think but i like ya opinion made me think about how i should of approuched it differently guess my mental mine frame was off.....
upp'in for more feed back...
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05-21-05, 12:16 PM | #4 | ||
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IP: 6063 0CE0
upp'in for more feed back ya dont sleep...........
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05-21-05, 12:17 PM | #5 | |||
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IP: 28AD 5545
Ayo Daz...
Its Because He Didnt Have AIM... So I Couldnt Work The Verses Into Eachother Or Creat A Storyline... I Wrote My Verse And Sent It... And Then He Just Added His And It Went On Post... Wasnt To Organized Of A Production, Thats Why... But Concidering I Never Really Got To Work With Con... I Think The Piece Came Out Pretty Nice... .One. |
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05-24-05, 01:37 PM | #6 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
yo, this woz hot. i woz feelin both of ur verses actually, the structure woz well thought out, nd u had sum gud wordplay. 8/10
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05-24-05, 02:51 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Closed no link , pm me a link if you wish to have this re-opened
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