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05-23-05, 04:10 PM
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Odi et Amo
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C.S.D. vs. Sakim Aerias
IP: 41CC 315E
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Topic: http://img1.imagetitan.com/img.php?...tonowhere4s.jpg
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05-23-05, 09:30 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: AB6B 44F7
O Finally a battle with a Picture........................
Checking in.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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05-27-05, 10:12 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: FEA6 7CAE
Sence my opponent didnt check in does this mean i still have to drop verse?..........It's friday, and by saturday........I will drop my verse for this shit.....1.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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05-28-05, 06:25 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: D8DF 0B27
You can always drop or maybe you could drop it in Poetic Scriptures. If you insist of course, I will leave it open for feedback but I think you'll get more of that if you drop it in the poetry forum
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05-28-05, 04:34 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: CA9A B7AE
Sweating under the heat, picking up crops, with a question “why” in my mind. Wearing the same clothes for 18 years, disgust by my figure of no food in my stomach I’m being trapped in the abyss, where a definition of “nice life” will never arise Flies swarm around me, by the reek smell of blood and sweats dripping so havoc My legs are sore, my arms are tired, and my heart can not continue no……more With an incredibility of strength I picked one more crop, then my exhaust body falls I thought for a minute, someone was tapping me, nope it was the whip, making my body sore Convulsion of my vocals screams with agony, while tears leaks through my eyeballs Although the sun is out, I’m on the ground, abashed, with an cold paroxysm I can feel the decent the color of red percolation that’s oozing out of my body “Get up nigger” “get up!” is the sound of voice that is ranging in my ear With strong arms that is pulling my weak arms, his voice raging on in gnarly Lid out an exhale breath, as I’m being chained, I can feel the coldness in the metals The whip hitting my back is so audio, but my screams are being deafened Being hanged in a crucifix position, it’s like, your hitting the god itself After so many stings, After all my tears leaked, my hopeless body drops to the floor Saw 2 white hands on my colored legs, my back on the ground I’m being dragged With the hot sun shining on the ground, and adding the stinginess pain on my back I put my arms up the air, and brought It close to my chest, then I felt the urge energy from Jesus Without no hesitant I got up, escaped the grasp of the white man, who the one whips thee Without no commonsense, without control, I went up to the white man face, my fist he met His back on the floor, while his eyes staring at me, with an bombshell look on his face My peoples sweat, tears, and corpse bodies, lay’d, on this ground, he didn’t give them no chances . . I run into the woods, I hear footsteps rushing through the bristles of the leaves….I pant and pant I’m not looking back, knowing that if I do, I’ll go through the hell again like the reverse of a clock I pant and pant, sweats drips through my open pores, and I smile as I heard the cheers from my people *clap clap* *cheers* Knowing that one person finally got out of this tantrum, the hate, the un equal I keep running and running, without even thinking of my heart or how much can it take…I run and run My foot ache by the hard rocks, the hard soil, which My people took care, the thought gave me more energy I run and run, my mouth is dry, my skin is getting prune by my sweats,…let it leak…leak take all pain away I run and……I stop my heart beating uncontrollably, my legs ache, trembling…*sigh* finally free as the ………………………………....Light makes an hole in the dark, a smile and happiness spreads on my face Kinda quick key'd at the end.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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05-31-05, 12:03 PM
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IP: BC9E 8B9A
Artisitica wins by HO-SHOW K.O. .
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