best u leave rap



[Verse 1]

I see the tears role down this girls cheek
Locks herself in the room, mans givin her greif
Crystal drops of rage fall splashin on the bed
No sense of self security encaged in his bred
A ruptured soul, she lays peacefully in her room
Like a newborn encased inside her mothers womb
While her mans out for chicken heads on the run
Cumin back with no paper - That man got Bun'd


[Chorus - Rap]

Girl u kno u doin wrong wen u say u wanna stay
Everyday is the same, neva change y u pay?
U say he still loves you & u say that he's tryin
Spen hours heelin cuts in yor room an still cryin
Still applyin.......But instead yor internally die'n
U gotta realise soon or later this is true
It's best u leave now before he ends up leavin u


[Verse2]

She knows what he do an she knows were he be's
Wanderin when the tears of pain would finally cease
I wonda y this girl's still taggin on da lead,
Still helpin him to breed, Man is best dat she Leave,
But shit dun change she's scared of gettin beaten down
To the ground, nothins changed, shes lettin him clown
She can't accept the truth, her paths built on skeptism
Livin life each day - In this way, She's imprisoned


[Chorus - Rap]

Girl u kno u doin wrong wen u say u wanna stay
Everyday is the same, neva change y u pay?
U say he still loves you & u say that he's tryin
Spen hours heelin cuts in yor room an still cryin
Still applyin.......But instead yor internally die'n
U gotta realise soon or later this is true
It's best u leave now before he ends up leavin u



(while gyal wlkin out)


[Verse 3]

I see her now, Shes made her choice, walkin out for gud
Exile from sufferin, endin pain i wish she could
Realise what's best, yet she relies on her heart
Ripped apart, an thrown away is only right they part
Is gunna take a while, alotta heelin to accomplish
U gotta run that mile, rebuild yor life and not demolish
The good memories before u chose to tie the knot
Thort u'd giv it all you got but now is time that u forgot



[Chorus - Rap]

Girl u kno u doin wrong wen u say u wanna stay
Everyday is the same, neva change y u pay?
U say he still loves you & u say that he's tryin
Spen hours heelin cuts in yor room an still cryin
Still applyin.......But instead yor internally die'n
U gotta realise soon or later this is true
It's best u leave now before he ends up leavin u



[Echoe Endin]

......ends up leavin u......ends up leavin u

Is best you leave now before he ends up leavin u

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nice piece cant be mad at this it sounds like the girls perspective of my backstaber freestyles(links in my sig please return the favor)into the feed...........

rhymes real good...flow almost perfect...structre perfect...chours real good....

8/10

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Tnx Fo D Uppins

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.............................. Mor Ups Plz

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hey dis was a dope piece fo real; luv da switch of styles on dis one; aint neva seen ya work, or atleast dont remember readin it; good structure, vocab, ect.....hit me up sometime fo a collabo or sumin.....1

Good feed ma, hot shit, good imagery and good topic to choose. Talk bout the real ish is always good,. RTF on my "Know ya roots" OM

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tnk yall very much... def appriciate

lil c ... id luv a collab,,, neva dun 1 b4

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yo dis was pretty tight nice,structa was allrite,and
and da rest was cool...9/10

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Tnx Fo D Upins ....relli Apriciate It

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