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Drakel 5 100.00%
Acuity 0 0%
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Old 05-21-05, 03:31 PM   #1
Adam
 
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Drakel vs Acuity

IP: A0C8 44A9

Battle Rules:

The Establishment vs 6 Feet

Topical Battle
Topic: Inbetween The Cracks

20-40 Lines

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Old 05-24-05, 03:04 PM   #2
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Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 03:04 PM.
 
Old 05-24-05, 03:05 PM   #3
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Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 03:05 PM.
 
Old 05-27-05, 11:41 AM   #4
Germ
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From: Adanac
IP: 9E2F CDE8

Inbetween the Cracks

beneath the surface, beyond what your eyes can see....there's so much more...

lets go.

welcome to a realm where existence is intended to bend
where pretends the norm, subsistent excitement, never knowing an end
in this land im king, soaring across the world on mystic lizards
blowing fiery smoke rings, or unfurling cataclysmic blizzards
fly along outlaws, storming across the heavens on explosive horses
shooting stars, creating vibrant streaks in the sky like corrosive forces
and the night sky rains down, splashing ripples in a crystal blue ocean
moonlight sparkling off mermaid's colorful scales as they continue in motion
i can see crossbones in the distance, roaring cannons are sounds of peril
waters littered with empty rum bottles and gunpowder barrels
this is pirate territory, shouldnt interfere when their gettin drunk'n pleasured
but far too overwhelming to pass up a shot at some sunken treasure
sneak on board, just for a peek or more, maybe swipe me some riches
but i open the captains door only to be transported to a tower of witches
hocus pocus, 10 cackling devils casting magic spells in all directions
but two snaps of my fingers and the right words give me a wall of protection
fireballs to the right, lightning to left, within moments they've fallen
so i walk over to the center of the room and take a plunge into the cauldron
i emerge from a lush jungle, at some ruins of some ancient, rare shrines
see some depictions on a large slab, curious, so i tare away the vines
"danger: do not push...a terrible threat to the world if ever released"
without thinking i press the switch, and emerges an enormous beast
glowing yellow eyes, sinister smile reflects of a full set of razor sharp saws
i turn and run but can't escape the grasp of the beast's massive claws
thrown 50 feet into the air, looking down i stare stragiht into the creature's soul
ready myself, "here goes nothing"...down to the belly of the beast, swallowed whole
i land in a muddy crater, its an odd shape and i know more than looks fit
3 large impressions stick out, and realize im standing in a dinosaur footprint
i turn around to hear a massive rumbling, a frightening roar is next
quickly, i decide to run...and out of the bush appears a tyrannosaurus rex
the chase is long....and the gigantic reptile closes in, teeth ready to strike
when we approach a cliff, a whisper releases wings from my back, i jump and take flight
i glide majestically, hovering over this secret, magical world
i touchdown softly near a glistening lake and remain there with a beautiful girl
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inbetween the cracks, shelters a world yet discovered
imagination flourishes a universe unknown by any other
escape to place so pure and great, its untouched by hate
fate is in your own hands, its anything you dream to create
fantasy becomes reality, locate anything you're hopin' to find
here, anything is possible, just as long as you open your mind
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well, i put this off way too long, lol.....anyways, went with a different approach here.....hope you like it

gl man
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