Yo, recorded, written, mixed in 2hours so theres probs a few lil quirks etc....

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qualuty can be upped, beat seems koo, i see where u going wif it
intro or w/e it was was ight

Emotion should have went up when u started the verse, i see you tryed to switch up delevery, needed more presence. Dubs and adlibs sound good wif beat, lyrics are ight, but gets boring cuz of montone and lack of flow and or delevery switch ups.

6/10

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my man... put it up on soundclick all these other sites dont work for me....

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nah man fuck sclick lol...up

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Listened to this earlier...it's a good joint lyrically but like i said on aim...you really shoulda spit something a lot faster coz i could tell in ya flow you were having to slow down just to keep on beat and IMO a faster flow woulda worked fine wit this track...lyrically nice...flow = aight but IMO shoulda been faster...but it might have harmed ya lyrically...meh try something wit it see how it comes off wit you...good track though

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I second that...soundclick can be a bitch for connectivity but when it does work...it's better than that other site you uploaded it on

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Pretty creative where u put yo songs..lol we all tired of sc..lol

Intro- Was nice kinda cought the my attentchun it was deep

Flow- sounds more like u readin, come wit more energy u kno and express yoself i kno u able to do that, lyrics was nice it related to the slow beat...emotional drift...........

"Show me the bigga plan"....nice...............


are u rastafara? cuz u kinda sound like a friend of mine...........lol

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thanks 4 the fed y'all...and my dad is rasta DV.. LION BRAHDA...bump

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YAAAAAAAAAAAA man..lol^^^I could relate my grandmotha's

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