Me
an escape from reality..cause life sucks..could make a nice buck..
wit dope lines and da right hook.9 to 5's.just nice crooks..
taxes and union dues..fuck it im in a mood t bruise..ta my mic's shook..
hip hop is my life's hook..and im just a fish in the sea..
like stevie..depth dont need vision ta see..
surround myself wit pads,pens,and a prison of beats..
im gunnin fa greatness til everybody's a spittin image of me..
lyrics of knowledge..i dont need a peeny or three..
hiphop's the equivalent of spittin fa free..
look at the greats..AZ must be da hottest damn..and twalib drop knowledge man..
bad pub must be the problem then
..cause droppin a top 5..i acknowledge them...
b4 pac and big...and krs taught me the proper way ta drop a diss..
look back at the lines and u get the proper list..(my top 5 (damn!!))

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lyrical science speared by the finest/
mathematical thinkers who's fear is compliance/
whose spirit's alliance with body and soul is logically told in written confinements/
we call them words hip hop calls them verses/
who sows seeds in souls we reap em for purpose/
we weep in words perfect/
without Microsoft processors our words surface/
from underground artists who burn nervous energy into slurred verses/
dependin on the dialect of the heard serpent/
whose venom is ill/
that is the antidote for the same venom that kills/
words my friend hip hop to me sick and free they’re so real/
hip hop the deck of cards with know known deal/
hip hop to me an envelope wit no seal//



Hip-Hop is the newspaper that nobody wants you to read..
Exposing the truth, and letting you have it sideways with no Vaseline..
A newspaper with vivid colors and fine print that's easy to see...
...........
Hip-Hop is the epitome of self expression..
where you can be you and just be you without having to make an exception..
without having to hold back..
With fear of what others might perceive..
You conceive your own style and fine tune it to suit your own needs..
An escape..
Hip-Hop is a great friend in which you can confide..
Put your trust in her, and easily get passed the hard times..…
Man, something happens to me whenever the beat drops…I’m finally happy…
I drown my sorrows in Hip-Hop…



Rob(my homie)
I Remember back when KRS had a High Fade
The Rhyme Page was Word Up and Rap wasn't High Paid.
I remember back when Slick Rick caught his First One
and LL damn near upstaged Everyone.
I remember the First Hip Hip album i ever bought
Ice Cubes' Lethal Injection the Day it Dropped.
I remember back when Pac droppedBrendas Baby
then Pac died in the 5th or 6th Grade Maybe.
Lately I rememberback when Biggie Rocked It
Some Hot shit about Wives, Ice n' Watches.
I remember back when Hip Hip was an Element
Not an Industry for any emcee to get Hella Rich..
I remember listenin' to ODB
before he hit the Rock like the Pen and Had 20 seeds.
I remember back when Canibus just smashed kids.
Then the nigga metWyClef and now he's past tense.
I remember when J-Lo only sang in the Shower
Nas wasIllmatic and Jay had Reasonable Doubts.
Still hungry lookin` for some clout and a Way Out
of Project buildin's with Cats slangin' in the Playground.
I remember when Kid n' Playwere Rappers
not half assed actors with Wack Talk Shows.
and flopped flows,I remember Alot But
the only thing that stands out is my love for hiphop.


{Switch up}Me
Hip Hop equals the birth of me....
Instead of cryin for pacifiers I beat-boxed in nurseries...
You Can't say you never heard of me...
Cause everytime you write a bar and say it out loud... you always sayin "word" to me...
You Missin the Point? Well that's only cause you reading fast...
Believe in Lil C my art displays hip hop like grafitti tags...
Make my words break dance when the beat rose then....
I make my bars stand up in the b-boy stands.. (chea)
What I spit spins records for dj's...
Line to line I'll have you beggin for replays...
My Knowledge Reigns Supreme Over Nearly Everyone...
Spit wit Public Enemy Niggas Wit Attitudes etcetera...
Da flow is Rapper's Delight while yall spit on Sugar Hills...
If practice makes perfect than DP's the skills yall could've built...
I laugh when cats act like they don't know what my purpose be...
You can't say you aint heard of me cause hip hop is the birth of me....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192881

first of all i think you need to fix your structure because it doesn't help the flow when your structure's all over the place......so work on trying to keep each line near enough the same length....you had some nice multi's thrown in here and there but i felt this drop lacked depth so to fix that you could up your vocab a lil bit....an alright drop though...keep elevating

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