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05-28-05, 09:47 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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A picture poem
IP: CA9A B7AE
http://img1.imagetitan.com/img.php?...tonowhere4s.jpg (CLICK THE LINK FIRST!) Sweating under the heat, picking up crops, with a question “why” in my mind. Wearing the same clothes for 18 years, disgust by my figure of no food in my stomach I’m being trapped in the abyss, where a definition of “nice life” will never arise Flies swarm around me, by the reek smell of blood and sweats dripping so havoc My legs are sore, my arms are tired, and my heart can not continue no……more With an incredibility of strength I picked one more crop, then my exhaust body falls I thought for a minute, someone was tapping me, nope it was the whip, making my body sore Convulsion of my vocals screams with agony, while tears leaks through my eyeballs Although the sun is out, I’m on the ground, abashed, with an cold paroxysm I can feel the decent the color of red percolation that’s oozing out of my body “Get up nigger” “get up!” is the sound of voice that is ranging in my ear With strong arms that is pulling my weak arms, his voice raging on in gnarly Lid out an exhale breath, as I’m being chained, I can feel the coldness in the metals The whip hitting my back is so audio, but my screams are being deafened Being hanged in a crucifix position, it’s like, your hitting the god itself After so many stings, After all my tears leaked, my hopeless body drops to the floor Saw 2 white hands on my colored legs, my back on the ground I’m being dragged With the hot sun shining on the ground, and adding the stinginess pain on my back I put my arms up the air, and brought It close to my chest, then I felt the urge energy from Jesus Without no hesitant I got up, escaped the grasp of the white man, who the one whips thee Without no commonsense, without control, I went up to the white man face, my fist he met His back on the floor, while his eyes staring at me, with an bombshell look on his face My peoples sweat, tears, and corpse bodies, lay’d, on this ground, he didn’t give them no chances . . I run into the woods, I hear footsteps rushing through the bristles of the leaves….I pant and pant I’m not looking back, knowing that if I do, I’ll go through the hell again like the reverse of a clock I pant and pant, sweats drips through my open pores, and I smile as I heard the cheers from my people *clap clap* *cheers* Knowing that one person finally got out of this tantrum, the hate, the un equal I keep running and running, without even thinking of my heart or how much can it take…I run and run My foot ache by the hard rocks, the hard soil, which My people took care, the thought gave me more energy I run and run, my mouth is dry, my skin is getting prune by my sweats,…let it leak…leak take all pain away I run and……I stop my heart beating uncontrollably, my legs ache, trembling…*sigh* finally free as the ………………………………....Light makes an hole in the dark, a smile and happiness spreads on my face Kinda quick key'd at the end
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05-29-05, 01:02 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 3240 794D
this is fucking dope for this i will vote you on the dreamteam i wasnt gonna but this shows elevation only thing i can say is take more time with youe endings on poetry you got time dont rush things homie.good emotion here couldve been a lil better imagery was perfection perfect on all levels easy to follow as well real real dope drop 8/10
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05-29-05, 01:05 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: CA9A B7AE
^^ haa thanx man, your feedback means alot to me thanx...................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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