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05-31-05, 06:23 AM
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Quick 4 Bars I Did In A Crew Diss On A Dif Site.
IP: F4C7 D6F9
After Taxes Ill Be The Envy Of |Laxitive-Raps-Brewed| Plus Yall Full Of Biters! So Lets Put 'Clipse On The Spot' Like Im |Blastin-Maps-Dude!| Cuz Original F@mm is a |Slackin-Wack-Crew| & I Got |Gaspin-Attacks-Newbs!| Cuz ill 'Leave Ur Heros Chests Flexed' Like |Shaq's-Tattoo!|
In Battles Yall |Newbs-Chalked-Wit-Votes| & Need To |Lose-Talk-Wit-Notes| Cuz U Biter |Crews-Talk-Wit-Quotes| Plus Its Funny How Original F@mms Roster Always 'Plays With Solo' Like |Chewbacca-Wit-Jokes!| RAWR!!! ROFLMAO!!!! Best Of Bests Battlin? Why Have |Collisions-Wasted| Cuz Im Like A 'Artists Headache' How Ill Have Yer |Contusions-Pasted!| Plus Im Known To Keep 'Dia L's Up' Like |Tuning-Stations| Plus Punches Will Leave Yall 'Clutching Yer Chests When Talkin' Like |Star-Trek-Communication!| 'UF Gives Props To Ass Drops' Like |Booty-Dudes!| But The Only Ass I Prop Is Connected Wit |Boobies-Too!| Im Tired Of You |Newbie-Crews| Cuz Yall Stick To 'Following The Bitch As A Leader' Like |Scooby-Doo!| Lets Get Serious!! |Disband-Plans-That-Bestow-Losers| With A 'Fiery Tongue' Like I Have |Satans-Glands-That-Blows-Yer-Crew-Over| .. Then |Gat-Fans-&-Slow-Posers| Cuz My Verses Will Leave U 'BANGing Ur Head Against The Wall' Like Old |Batman-Show-Posters!| |Fuckin-Fags!| Im A Psycho, The One Who Will Choke U Wit A |Rubberband!| .. Fuckin Fatasses Nothing But |Flubber-Damn| AND It Haulted My Plans Of A Cannibalistic Plot But These Faggots Shook & Carry 'NO WEIGHt' Like |PRO TEEN-Shakes| .. Fact Is These Kids Act Less Then |Fourteen..Wait!| Thats Just The Number Of Their 'Record In Losses & After They Hit The XXX Forum' To |Masterbate!!| FAGGOTS!! Yall Been Sonned Like Im A |Family-Guy| But You Kids Only 'Pose A Threat' Like Stewie Frome The |Family-Guy| .. I Shake & |Tandem-Lies| & Cant |Fathom-Bi's| Cuz U 'Pussies Seem To Sucking Ur Self Off' Like A |Sixty-Nine!!| Get It?
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05-31-05, 08:08 AM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Ok lemme see
In Battles Yall |Newbs-Chalked-Wit-Votes| & Need To |Lose-Talk-Wit-Notes| Cuz U Biter |Crews-Talk-Wit-Quotes| Plus Its Funny How Original F@mms Roster Always 'Plays With Solo' Like |Chewbacca-Wit-Jokes!| Yeah that was dope I liked this diss , some strong and creative punches in it , keep doing you http://community.rapverse.com/showt...580#post2186580 Please return the favour |
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05-31-05, 09:59 AM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop a link Kin to get more feedback or this willl be closed
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06-01-05, 08:12 PM
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IP: B13A C01D
i don't like your structure... at all
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06-01-05, 08:38 PM
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IP: D92C 0475
This wasnt bad. Everything flowed pretty well and you had a pretty good amount of multis in there to help out with that as well. You also had some decent punches in there.
After Taxes Ill Be The Envy Of |Laxitive-Raps-Brewed| Plus Yall Full Of Biters! So Lets Put 'Clipse On The Spot' Like Im |Blastin-Maps-Dude!| Im guessing his name is either Clipse or has Clipse in it. Nice shit. |
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