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[verse 1]
All kinds of peeps throwin out disses Men comin home yellin at the misses Everyone yellin not knowin what to do Always complainin about what they goin through Not understandin whats goin on Not figurin out that they are just a pawn In this world full of iniquity Abandonin the Lord, the Almighty Always askin why their life is so bad Never lookin up they continue bein sad They'll never come to the full conclusion Never lookin toward the True Solution Always got their heads hangin low Walkin around with a tormented soul They can't express what their missin Just waitin on Someone to come and listen Wantin nothin more than just to feel love Goin to worldly things instead of lookin above Passin by the local church everyday But decidin that that's not the way They continue home with a missin peace Wonderin if the pain will ever cease [hook][sing] Come to God and fill in the hole Come to Him He'll never let you go He'll always be there no matter what For you He was broken, bruised, and cut Let Him pull you out of the mud And clean you off with His blood [verse 2] Violence, sex, and hate Are always the issues of debate Everyone talkin about personal gain And always lookin for some kind of fame Schools losin all their foundations Forsakin the One Who made the nations Students never learn about the truth They go everywhere else for the proof Of their existence and why they are here Goin to drugs and through a six pack of beer Everyone wonders why the world is so evil Never leavin the house cause its so lethal Never sittin back to look at the full picture Never goin to the Word for their literature Wars and pestilence plague the earth And many marvel at the notion of second birth But really it ain't that hard to get Just follow Jesus and everythin else forfeit He will fill the hole in your heart Once He's there He'll never part So go ahead and let the pain cease He'll offer you an eternal peace [hook 2x] http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2183486 uppin for feedback
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still uppin for some feedback
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Yo my brother, you very brave to write this stuff down, some cats wont agree with u but it was good. On a OM level it was good and rhymed and flowed near perfection but on a God level if you get me was really good, saying about real stuff thats what Im about too, talkin bout real shit. RTF on my "help me lord" OM, its in my sig. Thanks
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Thanks man.....still uppin
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