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Old 05-20-05, 07:50 PM   #1
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MarvJay1009 vs AckRite

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Old 05-20-05, 07:51 PM   #2
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AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 07:51 PM.
 
Old 05-20-05, 08:12 PM   #3
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 08:12 PM.
 
Old 05-20-05, 08:13 PM   #4
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Listen Up Kid....

We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile
Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'!

On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts
Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS!

Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS!
I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts!

You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool!
Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool!

Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion
Next Time You PM Me To Battle....
.....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion!

EZ...


(1) His Record Has Ova 40 Wins...Its Old...Senile
(2) LIFE-STYLES....Condom? Uh-Duh
(3) He A Fag, Therefore Only Way He Wont Fuck Is If Butts Didnt Exist
(4) I Said He Wines, So He "DO-FUS" He Does Fuss...Complains
(5) Flow=Menstruation...A.C.=Cool Air
(6) He PM'd Me To Battle Him....
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Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!"



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Old 05-20-05, 08:17 PM   #5
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yes yes ya'll....

me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'.
but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites".
da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true.
like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.*
im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid.
& a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.**
fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great.
ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate".
get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk".
yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work".

*in his sig it says he aka is tko....
**in his sig he got all dressed up n shit da take a pic
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Old 05-20-05, 09:13 PM   #6
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Aha Lol Nice Shit No Bull.............Best Shit Eva Spit At Me So Far

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Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

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Old 05-20-05, 10:45 PM   #7
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see i told nobody votes in dis forum 4 shit
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Old 05-20-05, 10:50 PM   #8
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Aeyo....I Think We Should PM Strobe 2 Close This Thread....Then Make Da Same Shit In Front Lines....Use Da Same Verses, So This Shit'll End Earlier

Cuz Dis Is O.D.
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Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!"



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Old 05-21-05, 11:25 AM   #9
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 05-21-05, 03:44 PM   #10
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Uppin For Some Votes...........Damn This Shit Really Is Dead..........Worse Than Front Lines
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Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!"



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Old 05-22-05, 06:53 AM   #11
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jus checkin polls.........
Nice battle!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-22-05, 02:21 PM   #12
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn
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Old 05-23-05, 07:30 PM   #13
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Jeah Uppin Dis Shit Once Again.........Paradox Why Dont You Vote Homie
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Old 05-23-05, 07:55 PM   #14
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dammmm fukkin vote bitches
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Old 05-23-05, 09:04 PM   #15
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

[CENTER]ackrite

We All Know You Live Online, Ya Records Fourty..............And Senile
Told Jay Go 'GET A LIFE'......He Reincarnated Into A Pack Of 'Styles'!
ok....skraight...6/10
On My Dick? He Must Be NUTS......Fuckin Herb, I'll Kill You Wit Blunts
Fagget Smut, Only Way He'd Give Up Sex Is If There Were No BUTTS!
ehhh...not really a good punch...looks like your tryin to attempt a personal...4/10
Salived Guts....Marv Has No 'JAYS'.....All His Shots Wine & DO-FUS!
I Got Sluts!, Tell Everybody How All Ya Squirrel's Men Who Got Nuts!
straight first line...weak second...5/10
You Nasty Fool...Last Time Jay Tasted Saliva It Was His Own Drool!
Heard He's A HOT-Head, My 'Flows-A.C.'......Menstruatin Til Ya Cool!
alrite............6/10
Finishin Marv's Easy, He Not Da Hardest Ive Tested...Lil Suggestion
Next Time You PM Me To Battle....
.....................Make Sure Ya 'SHITS-TIGHT' Like Hemroid-Congestion!
lol.....str8 closer....7/10

overall-28/50

marv jay

me lose 2 ackrite?,lol im 'real' like "nas in belly" i dont 'act right'.
but how's dis cat nice...he dont key bar's dis nigga "ack (w)rites".
good..........6/10
da iLLUNaTiKZ is da wackest of crew's,ur a fake nothin u rappin is true.
like ya rec. u gon lose 5-0 ya a.K.a 'TKO' well datz about 2 happen 2 u.*
good personal...couldve been worded better...6/10
im no joke make ya dome smoke afta clipz hit up ya wig,dis nigga is a kid.
& a homo who you gets dressed up 2 put pictures in his sig.**
ehhh...weak...4/10
fella wait..noobie's be tellin u da elevate,u were neva great.
ima be da "NEX" 2 "TEL(L)" u tell ur wack so dont "CELL-abrate".
now that shit was nice as fuck...9/10
get it! u'll be puttin "ice on ya lip" since u think its "COOL da smerk".
yea u got tools da squirt,but ya gun like ppl "on welfare" it "refuse 2 work".
good...7/10

overall-32/50

v/marvjay1009
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