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Old 06-12-05, 09:31 PM   #1
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If tommorow was yesterday and the days were the same.
I would relive memories in the heart and change them in the brain.
Plain and unused lives, would suddenly turned to be alive.
And a person who was destined to die, would suddenly survive.
Stuggles and troubles for the homeless, would suddenly cease.
And we could go back to wars of today, to make a way for peace.
We could release love, instead of all this pain and sadness.
Give a chance to every person we judged, instead of fights and madness.
We had this chance once, juss think of all the good possiblities.
We could create a car in the 1600's, and rebuild destroyed cities.
Show pity, to evil and some people would even make weed legal.
And some kid living sadly, wouldn't have to see the death of his beagle.
Steeples at the churches would be empty, cause everyone lives forever.
Prostitutes would relive sex and each time make the experience better.
Letters from soldiers over seas, would be relived again and enjoyed.
And the soldier would have time to mail his kid and send him toys.
Voids of the world would vanish, without a single doubt or even a trace.
If tommorow was yesterday, yesterday would be tommorow's place.
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Old 06-12-05, 09:36 PM   #2
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Old 06-12-05, 09:48 PM   #3
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yo prep. this peice i was deff feelin .. lots of emotion and good points about life and society, really makes ya take a second look at the world and how we live.. vocab was tight, few multies too... 7.5/10
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Old 06-12-05, 10:03 PM   #4
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uppin ya'll i took tyme to express my thoughts....lemme get some feed.....thank you
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