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Old 06-04-05, 01:57 PM   #1
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Calamity - Lucifer's Son (freeverse)

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heard this beat on anno Domini's Beat sit.. hes a cat that used to chil here for a while.. klids came up.. his beats are pretty nice..

ok any way, i heard this beat and just let the verse flow...
Dont know if i wanan finish the track or not.. but its just the first verse.. no smooth fade at the end.. just a section where the chorus would be and the verse.. i like it.. just gimme some feedback.. positive negative.. w/e ya like.. and if i seem rusty lol.. this is my first time touching my mic sinnce like well winter time for real.. tryna shake my rust off for the tourny..

Quality is aiiight.. not my normal shit i dont think.. im also rusty with Cool edit lol.. fuck..

ok nuff talking... holla at the song..

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Old 06-04-05, 02:26 PM   #2
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peepin. i like this arabic feel to the beat. i mite have to jack it... u got a good voice, this is a story track, im feelin it... vocals are a lil low. emotion could b upped in some parts... u spittin real tho. i can tell there is no kinda of frontin in ya voice... this beat reminds me of the egyptian level in supermario 64.. this was short but yea i was feelin it... let me kno i u ever wanna hit a joint up...
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Old 06-04-05, 04:54 PM   #3
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Hot drop. Thats word. Beat is sick. Flow is nice, and quality is pretty good. I love the way you came at this topic sideways man. Should get my on the 2nd verse Good to see you droppin again. I got a good idea for the hook too if you ain't have one already. If you finish it solo should be dope - so either way. Holla. 1
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Old 06-04-05, 05:03 PM   #4
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i love this...dopeness, werd. finish it up tho...like add more verses...mayb a chorus
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Old 06-04-05, 06:16 PM   #5
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the beats sounds nintendo so its dope lol, nice flow, vocal is low, nice quality, story type telling song...so thaT makes it more dope, like your voice, drop a chorus on it
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Old 06-05-05, 12:54 AM   #6
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Beat indian vibe in it, calam voice became lil rawish...nice presence quality witout a question one of the best u need to help my ass on that..lol

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Old 06-05-05, 01:49 AM   #7
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Karamo ass nigga aint leave feed on my track like I asked. *leaves some anyway*

Beat is coo. Flow is kinda eh for some reason, not as dope as usual. Lyric-wise, it kinda felt like you were forcing yourself to put big words IMO, you should just come more down to earth instead of trying to come complex, it's much more you.

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Old 06-05-05, 12:44 PM   #8
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^ good looks.. i returnred the feed Soc.. good looks peeps.. Phenom i might holla at you next time i see you on eabout this fa sho... but yea.. i have A.D.H.D so i dont finish most off my songs lol...... but yea thanks for the feed guys.. uppin.
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Old 06-07-05, 07:34 PM   #9
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this nice fam u ripped the beat easily flow and presence were sick...beat is hot as fuck 8/10 nice work
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Old 06-08-05, 12:05 AM   #10
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clizzamity wsup thugga nice shit herrrrrrrrr kid i liked ya flow since the hip hop collab only getttin better keep droppin em and holla
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