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Old 06-10-05, 04:07 PM   #1
Krash DJ
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*Squashed Beef* (Diss to ACE)

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This is Krash's antics, every time I step up the bitches panic/
I don't give static, but man I've had-it/
No one knows who I be, no one cares the shit I see/
How I learned lifes ABC, from some self-help DvD/
Media related, half the rappers hated/
The others forgotten, half the spits is rotten/
Diss a man, then yous hoppin/
No balls between ya legs, claim you empty kegs/
Claim fame that ain't yours/
Yous a dog yeah but yous on all fours/
Bendin it over for dickriding whores/
Stackin the scores/
Just to make you look good/
Sayin shit like 's'all real in da hood'/
But your hood is ya million dolla house/
How you hardcore when you wearin a blouse/
Uneducated shit that means you're a bitch/
Thinkin yous a playa from watchin hitch/
Damn you're more retarded/
Than the beef ICP tried to get started/
Fuck man what da fuck you thinkin/
I can't even understand ya shit and I've been drinkin/
To hell with it, run with it, fall with it, and die with it/
I'm through with it, gonna finish it, with suck a dick/
Smile and walk away, cause I'm ending this shit my own way/


*This was a audio I did to a guy I use to roll with....*
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Old 06-10-05, 04:25 PM   #2
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u had some good lines...u need work on structure...and this was pretty week for a diss...but i see potential...keep workin at it...5/10
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