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Old 06-16-05, 11:30 AM   #1
MsBoOtYpHaT4U69
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If you give a nigga....

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If u give a nigga some puzzy
he's probably gonna want some head to go wit it
if u don't give him any head
he'll probably want to start a argument
if he starts an argument
he's probably gonna bring up what u don't do for him
if he brings up what u don't do for him
he's probably gonna want to leave
if he leaves more than likely he won't tell you where he is going
he's probably goin to call up another female
once he can't reach her
he's probably gonna go to da club
and once he get bored he's gonna want to come home
when he come's home he'll probably be alittle horny
if he's horny he's probably gonna want to make up
if ya'll make up he's probably gonna want some puzzy
if u give him some puzzy....well
YOU KNO DA REST!
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Old 06-16-05, 09:55 PM   #2
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well if you are new to poetry, i can say add me so i can help you with your writing bcuz it seems that you r trying to write poetry the same way other poeple are and its not really working, add me on aim or msn

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i will help you on writing poetry a prose.

but this was pretty good for a first goer at it.
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