Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate
No d/r

3 - 0 automatic win.


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 11:58 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Soddit has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 11:36 AM.

Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 11:38 AM.

you continued to beef, but now i'm gonna prove youre wacker now.
but i admit you got readers hands up...tryna keep the vomit down!
what kinda name is that? quit acting and give up tryna be a mc.
coz once i cut this lame, paper wont have a fucking edge on me!*
i'll erase this fool, batter and bruise this faggot ass rook.
so you can "write" your own story, but you'll still be a bitch in my book!**

all the personals are on the fact that weve been beefing.
* no edge on me.. = in his user title it says paper cuts. so if he has no edge he cant cut me lol. edge - being effectiveness.
** his name is pen n paper.. = you should get it.
if you dont get anything pm me, or dont vote.

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What the hell is a “soddit” man and u couldn’t be ill even if u were an infection
Even if I showed him the way for perfect… he’ll still be askin for the directions
Is this a joke? Without hands around his neck I could still make him choke
Cuz guy is a nervous wreck and when it comes to his text he still gon be broke
Punches against him are like a homicidal person but ill make u think of suicide
The five lines above are like the 5 rounds in Tysons fight and im Kevin McBride

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you got ripped, so lets squash the beef now. let our verses do the talking. upping.

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uppin this man lets get sum votes aight stop sleepin peeeps

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...........................................upping.

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uppin this lets get votes

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man let gets sum votes man plz leave ur votes aight uppin

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Pen n´Paper: you got betta punchez n´ you had sum very good worldplay...you did good in the battle and had a nice flow you didnt have any multis but still ya verse wuz betta

Soddit : I wasnt feelin yor shit n´your punchlinez didnt come out hard like paper´s you were good but not enough to win the battle

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"You Gotta Clean Your Life Before You Begin Your Life, You Dumb Nigga" -2Pac-

SHEEP CLUB 4 EVA

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Keep Votin (Ill RTF)
Me Vs Ax Dogg...Dont listen to the haters..I didnt bite any line...

Me Vs Murdz

everybody wake up and vote stop sleepin on this

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

GOOD:

Flow - Mr.Shriggle
Structure - Pen n Paper
Punchlines - Tie
vocab - Nope
Wordplay - nope
Nameplay - nope

BAD:

forced Rhymes - Mr. Shriggle
Forced Multis - nope
Non Sence - Mr. Shriggle

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - nope
Creative Punches - Tie
creative multi's - nope

PERSONALS:
Wack personals, but Pen n Paper got at least personals..

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: No one
Closing: Pen n Papaer

COMMENT:
The most hard hittin punches were Pen n Paper's ones, but they seemed a lil wacker cuz he lost a lot of flow,
Mr.Shriggle forced too many rhymes so he didn't got a chance

Pen n Paper: 6/10
Mr. Shriggle: 4.5/10

V/ Pen n Paper

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Bizzacckkk

ok thnx for tha vote uppin this for sum more

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