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Oop, here I go again, rappin like it shoulda been, what is it about again?
Killin and rapin and all things druggin? Wow, what a life, charges and thuggin. All the scars, producin, the children are reducin Crime is outrageous, your outfit bodacious Don’t ya see this way of life ain’t no way, Ya’ll brought it over to mainstream, and now ya’ll think its play Now ya got all the whites, thinkin they gansta They b gettin themselves shot because they some stupid wangsta Chaos begettin chaos, all that it is. The world soon b coming to an end. World is dying, where you gonna be? Earth is crying, where is my dignanty? Civilizations are trying, to show us their history Showing us what happened to them, so we don’t repeat the misery. Help yourself and help the world, let God back in and a new people will unfurl.. Churches n religions gettin crazier by the minute,cults springin up takin our youth power with em. When are parents gonna step up, get some balls. Call on the Lord and be parents that is their call. When are people going to realize its not about religion Its about forgivin and givin in to Jesus Christ the Livin. Sittin here writin ain’t gonna get it done folks More people need Jesus than some of these rapper folks. Your neighbor, your kid, your mama, your sib. U just scared to try n ask them if they know the way so they can see a forever day. Well you’re the one is gonna pay, so I am, one of these days. World is dying, where you gonna be? Earth is crying, where is my dignanty? Civilizations are trying, to show us their history Showing us what happened to them, so we don’t repeat the misery. Help yourself and help the world, let God back in and a new people will unfurl. I thank God for showing everyone what he did. My parents who were mixed up and got forgive Strung on drugs and drinkin and all the Lord forgave them for sins big and small. He still forgives mine, Lord knows I got plenty He gives us rewards in heaven for the good things we’ve done And there will be many. But my big questions is are you ever gonna any?
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this was good, wordplay was ok as well as structure, vocab decent to me....emotion and imagery pretty good as always, keep it up babe
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IP: B52C 6258
this was ok, it kinda rambled on sometimes. but it had some decent lines in there ok flow, but you need to work on some meta's or multies or somethin to make ya joint stand out, ya feel me? i give it a 7/10,
holla at me check out the links in my sig and return the favor
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Gonna up this one more time
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