Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-24-05 at 05:31 AM

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Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 05:33 AM.

When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window,
The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo,

Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please,
Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees,

Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,*
Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,**

I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title,
Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital,

Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most,
All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast...

*his name is in black and blue
**left DM to be in RAW

last line= 5 letters out of the letters that make up his name can be rearranged to spell boast

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 09:19 PM.

straight keyed


This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid
Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’
When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty
Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD*
You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me
Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting
This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to**
And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you
Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie
Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime


*MD stands for medical doctor
**people call God, Jah

uppin this.........................................

Voted For: Souljah

When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window,
The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo,
^^wak
Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please,
Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees,
^^weak......
Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,*
Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,**
^^Nice...ur best bar
I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title,
Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital,
^^whack
Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most,
All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast
^^weak nameplay

Well,you had too much basic shit about killin or beatin him.It's okay to do dat,but use metas or sumtin...not basic shit.Only hot bar was the personal one.Everything else suked.

This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid
Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’
^^^weak and whack
When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty
Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD*
^^^LOl...nice
You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me
Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting
^^^didn't rhyme,stretched as fuq,whack
This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to**
And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you
^^^nice.....
Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie
Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime
^^^nice

You had some real nice punches in there.Only thing that suked about ur ver was that renting one.But besides that...this was ahot verse.U got this easily.

Vote-Sabotage(vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194845


Vote switched

Voted For: sabotage

This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid
Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’
wack opener
When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty
Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD*
okay
You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me
Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting
not so great here
This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to**
And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you
nope
Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie
Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime
lie & dime.. hardly rhyme


When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window,
The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo,
decent
Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please,
Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees,
nope
Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,*
Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,**
weak
I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title,
Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital,
weak
Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most,
All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast...
closer was aight

overall sabotage took this one.. punches were just harder
hitting.. but both of u need to elevate.. add some personas
in ur rhymes also..

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

^ my first 2 barz were personals...pay more attention next time.....

i didn.. but i didn't like 'em

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7 Day Theory

Voted For: sabotage

souljah:
When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window,
The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo,
^^^I DONT KNOW IF U PEEP OTHER BATTLES BUT DA DOPE LINES R PLAYED FAM
Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please,
Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees,
^^^??????WHUT LOL
Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,*
Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,**
^^DECENT...BEST LINE OF YA VERSE

I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title,
Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital,
^^^NAH
Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most,
All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast...
^^^LOL .....DIS WAS SUPER WACK

sabotage:
This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid
Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’
^^^DIS WOULD OF BEEN HOTT..IF SLIM & KID RYHMED
When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty
Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD*
^^NAH
You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me
Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting
^^^DIS DONT RYHME
This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to**
And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you
^^^LOL...OKAY
Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie
Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime
^^^TERRIBLE WORDIN....


V/SABOTAGE...HE HAD AT LEAST ONE GOOD LINE IN HIS VERSE...SOULJAH U HAD NO CREATIVITY NO PUNCHLINES YA WHOLE VERSE WAS WACK FAM

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL VOTE ON A NIGGA BATTLE

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

I shoulda said if people don't understand anything in the battle don't vote.


Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please,
Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees,
^^^??????WHUT LOL

you obviously don't know what's been goin on recently, and you don't understand uk slang so why'd ya bother?

"Oh my days" is how we say "oh my god" where i come from
"On my jays" means "by myself" or "on my own" where i come from
"The family" refers to Doc Murder

Anyway uppin for more votes

yeah but u stil suck so shut up.....................