yep...i left feed on Straight Aim's joint...and i left feed on Dacument's "Ifucked ya girl"........

this is the verse i used for the battle in the tourney for Spuls Mic.....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/youngike_music.htm


the beat switches...so make sure u dont cut it off after the 1st beat ends...i go from tryin to be funny to a more serious feel with the beat switch...

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i already posted my vote on the battle, so i just stoppin by to show love, the track was hot....sound like a young Em for a min....lol

be easy

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DaCument

yo this was dope...lol i love the beginning...flow was on and u actually were funny on a deep serious beat...u had good punches and good rhymes..7.5 keep it up dawg

you need to turn you vocals up...

flow's not bad, i like how you're laid back, but i also think you're tooo relaxed for a battle track... your voice isn't launchin your punches because u sound like your about bust out singin again

oh shit... this second half is tight

flow is sick, flow smooth, delivery is nice... lyrics tight Rebound like rodman's prime stuck out to me

damn yo... minus the first half this is a badass verse

but because of that gay ass first half... i only give this a 6.5/10


damn you sure did close strong though

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thanks for the feed everybody

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man, tha singing sucks, like tha syllabols are kinda stretched... yea u really too laid back, u picke da bad beat to do a battle on... waitin for this beat switch up... aight now it switches... now u comin with punches, meh they are just so so to me... u got an aight voice to work with but ur flow is kinda laggin in my oppinion, i dunno i wasnt feelin this as much as every1 else was, but i thought it was mediocre...

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the beggining is wack in my opinion.. dont ever do that again LOL...

ok first beat - punches are aiiiiight.. flow is mad slow.. second beat was better.. first punch was best in the song and it was decent.. hood line is nice.. other than that they were played.. you had a couple ok punches... but for a battle track that was on the mediocre side..
keep droppin tho

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