[hook]
Jesus said, “Take up your cross and follow Me
And you shall inherit heaven for eternity.”
Some people ask me if it’s really worth it
Yeah its worth it, cause I don’t deserve it

[verse 1]
I knew from day one that I would be set apart by God
And some way I would spread His word to millions abroad
Knowin that I would have to sacrifice everything I want
Risk embarrassment and every single kind of taunt
I never would have guessed He would lead me here
It took a while to see, but He made His point very clear
But something happened that I thought never would come about
The closest people to me getting mad and starting to shout
“Why do this, you are capable of bigger and better things?”
I simply say, “There’s nothing greater than serving my King
He’s the One that created everything and the reason that I sing
Is to proclaim His majesty and fellowship with the King!”

[hook]
Jesus said, “Take up your cross and follow Me
And you shall inherit heaven for eternity.”
Some people ask me if it’s really worth it
Yeah its worth it, cause I don’t deserve it

[verse 2]
“Goin down the wrong road, you’re goin to end up poor.”
But what they don’t know is that after I die, I’m goin to soar
Followin God’s will, He’ll bless me in ways unknown
And won’t find out until I kneel in front of His thrown
I don’t care if I have to forsake everything and everyone
It’s nothing compared to what was forsaken by the Son
I’ll be speakin His comin and love til I can’t talk no more
Doin my part in boostin God’s stats, lowerin the devils score
Don’t care if you don’t like me, or even if you start to hate
I’ll keep on flowin, never endin, cause this is my fate
Tell me your life story and I may be able to relate
Like me God will forgive you and clean off the slate

[hook]
Jesus said, “Take up your cross and follow Me
And you shall inherit heaven for eternity.”
Some people ask me if it’s really worth it
Yeah its worth it, cause I don’t deserve it








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Good job, not just sayin b/c. Good imagery, know what u sayin when you say close ppl get mad..but Lord willing it will work out. I give it 9/10. Really liked this one as compared to some others. Keep on 4 the Lord.

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3 nails + 1 cross = 4given
No matter how good you are there's always someone better.
I'm not the status quo stereotype you want me to be.

im not in ta this religious shitt but lookn past tht, it was nicce, i like ya flow

thanks y'all, uppin this...

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The rhymes were basic, but it was good overall. A lot of assonances/alliterations and more metaphors would've helped, along with some complex multies. It was somewhat predictable, and what you want to do is blow some minds but not go over people's head.

^^ 7.5/10

Keep on reppin' the up-north side.

Damn... that's sum good shit
good creatrivity

but you missed vocab, n multi's LOL

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Bizzacckkk

ok, thanks for the input, will keep it in mind, uppin

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uppin..........

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uppin..................

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