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View Poll Results: CherryBluntZ vs. .Murdz.
.Murdz. 5 100.00%
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Old 06-29-05, 12:17 AM   #1
CherryBluntZ
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CherryBluntZ vs .Murdz.

IP: 8705 E227

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10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Old 06-29-05, 12:19 AM   #2
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.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 12:19 AM.
 
Old 06-29-05, 12:24 AM   #3
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CherryBluntZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 12:24 AM.
 
Old 06-29-05, 12:29 AM   #4
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In Blockin ya Worth With Words When My Legion Occurs/
Watch as I 'Get Rid Of Murdz' Like "Procedures At Birth"//
Im feeding Ya Hearse Listen Man Im Ending ya SPitz/
Ill Have ya Face Lookin Like tha Same Kat In Ya Sig//
I lead with tha Sixth Sense and have u Feeling Berrettas/
When I put tha 'Piece to ya Chest' Like a "Seventies Sweater"//
Ill send ya to heaven Kid I got ya Quotables Locked/
Ill Put tha '9 to ya Face' Like a "Grandfather Clock"//
Breakin his Drops You Better Start Practicing Fair/
Before I 'Leave ya Body in Tha Garden' Like "Madison Square"//

Pz
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Old 06-29-05, 01:02 AM   #5
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Blah fuck this clown..gettin' abused like an unwanted spouse...
Tryin' to take the 'ghost'..like robbers in a haunted house... *
Kid forgot his artillery..boring like the Star Wars trilogies...
Guess my verse is like a can of 'Raid'...it'll easily Kill-a-Bee!... **
But this faggot's killin me...wonderin' whether to take him literally..
Cuz the bombs Ima drop'll send him back to the days of chivalry!...
Fuck all this crap..its been fun n shit..but u need to get bludgeoned wit,
A 'blunt' object while I snatch the votes like Communist goverments...
Outweighed like a ton of bricks..this kid ain't no 'legend'..so get to steppin..
The cops nearly had me arrested...thought my mouth was a murderous weapon..
But this is just textin..matter of fact..I can do all this in real life...
So I'll murder this faggot and his 'ghost'..that way..ull get killed twice!... ***
Fuck all this flattery..to me..you're juss becomin' another casualty...
N my punches? Fuckin up ur anatomy when I charge like dead batteries...
This 'Cherry B' aint worthy...any punches he MIGHT throw won't hurt me...
So fuck '16's'..ull juss get 'Fists' thrownback at you like Lou Gehrig jerseys...
^ Punches like that can easily destory half these lame cats n faggots...
Cuz its all over bitch..its all 'gully' n 'gutta' wackness..go home n practice...
So if I wasted anymore of my punches..I'd still be considered the best...
if this was the Finals? Everyone would get 'swept' like the Lakers did the nets...

* .been told he ghost writes.
** .kill-a-bee, kill a B, Kill a B-luntz..
*** .referin to ghost writin again.
 
Old 06-29-05, 01:18 AM   #6
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Murdz---

creative punches, n camed harder on this, almost a tied battle... good structure n flow ... but the nameplay won the battle

Cherry-

u forced sum rhymes, and flow was lost a bit but overall you got nice wordplay n decen punches but not enough... u need ta have mo' lines to win

Murdz - 8/10
Cherry - 6.8/10
V/ Murdz
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Old 06-29-05, 01:35 AM   #7
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Open-murdz
Close-cherry
Personals-murdz
Metas-Cherry
Punches-Murdz
Multies-Murdz

Win-Murdz
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Old 06-29-05, 02:52 AM   #8
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who told u I ghost write??? u jus sayin tht shitt ta up ya verse..
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Old 06-29-05, 03:54 AM   #9
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na, it wasnt uppin ma verse someone told me u from another site and u ghost wrote....
 
Old 06-29-05, 02:49 PM   #10
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Murdz, no offence but u a dumb bitch. Wht otha site was I on???? cuz now tht u posted tht i got anotha bitch sayin i ghost write so u spreadin this shitt around but leeme get sum proof
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Old 06-29-05, 02:53 PM   #11
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Voted For: .Murdz.

Flow-CherryBluntz(slightly though)....main reason is because he only had about 12 lines while Murdz had a lot more.Hard to keep a flow goin with a lot a lines

Punches-Easily Murdz.....it was long and some of it suked like hell...but some hit hard.Cherry...your shit was too basic and unoriginal.

Personals-Murdz....mainly because I didn;t notice a decent personal in Cherry's verse.The only one I can recall seeing was the one about the sig. which suked

Vocab.-Murdz......cherry had nutin apart from the words used in everyday language.

Multis-Murdz.....more lines played a part in this catergory.

Originality-Murdz.....as Cherry's verse was plagued with played concepts.

Well the more lines Murdz put played a big part in this.Cherry...next time...put as much lines as the rules say ya can.U gotta match up against the oppenent.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552
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Old 06-29-05, 04:29 PM   #12
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hmmm, thought murdz came with better concepts, both had nice flow and structure....murdz had some self=glore lines, but take them away and he still won; he had harder punches, nice wordplay....cherry, you were decent...but i dont think your punches were that hard hitting....nice concepts and all, but didn't have the creativeness and effective wordplay to pull em off.......sorry man, still a pretty close battle though

v/murdz.....RTF or this will be removed
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Old 06-29-05, 09:10 PM   #13
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uppin this thanks for the votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
 
Old 06-29-05, 10:28 PM   #14
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 06-29-05, 11:36 PM   #15
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Breakdown

flow- Murdz hade the only good flow lol hard to say bcuz usually thats where he lacks off at times but he takes it in the battle

PunchezMurdz def takes this for multiple reasons But ima state the one and thats originality which is a whole nother area so ima leave it alone and jsu tell you that murdz takes punchez with ease

personals-Murdz- had the only Personals in this battle and that why he takes this you cant give it to cherry bcuz he didnt drop any personals ''

multies-Murdz- had some small multies nuttin specail jus regular words that you usually see put together at times so he takes this area also as well

vocab- Nobody used any good vocab and this battle so this area will stay empty //....

Originality- Murdz- Takes this area in overall orginality Bcuz His verse had persnal and unplayed concepts and punchez and good wordplay terrfic style and wording so he takes this area and this battle overall

so my v./ Murdz
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