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07-12-05, 03:46 PM | #1 | |||||
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On A Mission
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These words r mine, true from the heart
inspired by the Divine, give me a sec while u read these lines cause what they say could rearrange ya mind. What I gotta say ain’t no mystery its ancient history, and alive today In 1 A.D a boy was born, in 33A.D he died in scorn, just another execution, by some jacked up prosecution Thought was over, the ignorant Roman soldiers, til 3 days passed, he was alive at last, told everyone what just had transpired, believers admired. Do you know the guy I’m talkin of the One who was sent from up above? Killed falsely, wrongly done, we killed our creator, God’s only Son. Yet ya treat him like a spare tire there when ya need it then ya transpire, not givin an hour, or even two, you treatin him worse than the ancient Jews. Last but not least, he’s gonna come back with vengence in his hand and no cross on his back. He’s comin down after the rapture to abonish the one they call the Master. The deciever, the snake whatever you wish, he’s gonna stay down in a fiery abyss, this time we call it the Armageddon War, cuz after this we live forevermore. Do you know the guy I’m talkin of the One who was sent from up above? Killed falsely, wrongly done, we killed our creator, God’s only Son. Yet ya treat him like a spare tire there when ya need it then ya transpire, not givin an hour, or even two, you treatin him worse than the ancient Jews. Livin forever sounds grand and nice, but are you gonna be smoking or nonsmoking better think twice.
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07-12-05, 05:12 PM | #3 | ||||
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Drop a link or this will be closed
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07-12-05, 09:17 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 0DB3 4A20
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199399 here's my link
Uppin
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07-12-05, 09:20 PM | #5 | ||||
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nice hook
elevate on structure and vocab... when you master that try multi's and then you do wordplay, cuz flow was kinda fucked up no hate
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