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07-13-05, 03:25 PM | #1 | |||
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La'Don the Monkey hahaha
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this one right here... is gon be open mic of the century!!
if the world was mine, everyone would have a monkey that kinda makes me laugh, its kinda funny if you had a monkey what would you name it? id name it La'Don nd i would playfully tame it wed take long walks in the park, by moonlight id leave the house hed say youll be home soon right? upon my return wed play in our tree fort, no girls aloud as my monkey grew up.. i grew so proud watched my monkey la'don graduate first grade i was there the first time my monkey got laid we used to say best friends forever, 2-2-4 we watch football together nd say who you for? id say im feelin the home team, he liked away he used to tell me the stats id be like ya dont say he used to buy me soda. nd rub my back he used to pretend to stage a monkey attack hed hide in the attic till i walked by and when he jumped on my back id act surprised then id throw him on the floor nd kick him in the face then he sprayed my eyes down wit a bottle mace nd im like whered you get that, man, what the fuck hes like im runnin away man you fuckin suck im like no La'Don you cant leave me now im like how you gon walk out on me, man, how? he said jus like this nd he hopped thru the door then i heard my car start.. and i heard a roar i went outside nd my ride was gone i said i curse that monkey, fuck you La'Don i called the police. they thought i was jokin the dispatcher was like, kid what you smokin? i said no for real the monkeys gettin away they said ya ok.. nd i grew a 3rd arm today i hung up the phone and sat there in aww then i reminisced on the events i saw i saw a monkey go to school, nd get some ass i saw a monkey steal my car nd step on the gas he drove away fast nd i was left with no pet id have a monkey if the world was mine... ..........................but it aint mine yet
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07-13-05, 03:27 PM | #2 | |||
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this is definetly going to make open mic of the century ... you all know it
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07-13-05, 03:34 PM | #3 | |||
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07-13-05, 04:32 PM | #4 | |||
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uppin uppin....
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07-14-05, 10:38 AM | #5 | |||
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c'mon people this shit is hott fire just gimme some feed
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07-14-05, 11:16 AM | #6 | ||||
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funny drop man, flow was pretty good, vocab was good, overall good and funny read, keep it up man
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07-14-05, 04:09 PM | #7 | |||
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thannks man uppin...
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07-14-05, 04:12 PM | #8 | |||||
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i thought it was a pretty funny topic to rap about and it flowed flawlessly and you got creative and i like that so much props fam.
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07-15-05, 11:02 AM | #9 | |||
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yo thanks for tha props homes.... uppin
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07-15-05, 05:12 PM | #10 | |||
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uppin this ishhh... you know its OM of the century!!
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07-16-05, 11:54 AM | #11 | |||
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uppin for some more feedback
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07-17-05, 12:02 PM | #12 | ||||||
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Yeah Flo Was Tight And Story Tellin Goff The Hook But Need Some Multi's For Sure Bu Tnice Read Doe And Funny
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07-17-05, 04:40 PM | #13 | |||
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thanks man.. uppin
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