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Old 07-17-05, 07:52 AM   #1
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New DABATOS feat. Q..."Don't know why"...collabo...holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Beat: "Don't know why I love you"
Verses: Hook...1st Dabatos...hook...2nd Tha Q...Hook


Theme: We've all been there...love is blind type -ish




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Old 07-17-05, 08:07 AM   #2
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the beat is nice..but I think I heard it before

Chris - man...quality fuked you up......flow is ok...work on your breath control.....delivery isn't good...and try to get better mic presence because you sound so damn dull, which makes your flow boring..

Tha Q - If thats you second...your quality seemed to go down...flow is nice..delviery is good..delivery is straight..and you pretty good but I can't get over the fact your "Strictly Dickly"
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Old 07-17-05, 08:36 AM   #3
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eeehhhh....strickly dickly?

hmmm


aiight


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Old 07-17-05, 02:25 PM   #4
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the beat is nice..but I think I heard it before

Chris - man...quality fuked you up......flow is ok...work on your breath control.....delivery isn't good...and try to get better mic presence because you sound so damn dull, which makes your flow boring..

Tha Q - If thats you second...your quality seemed to go down...flow is nice..delviery is good..delivery is straight..and you pretty good but I can't get over the fact your "Strictly Dickly"

shyt............ lol.. o well
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Old 07-17-05, 02:33 PM   #5
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the beat is nice..but I think I heard it before

Chris - man...quality fuked you up......flow is ok...work on your breath control.....delivery isn't good...and try to get better mic presence because you sound so damn dull, which makes your flow boring..

Tha Q - If thats you second...your quality seemed to go down...flow is nice..delviery is good..delivery is straight..and you pretty good but I can't get over the fact your "Strictly Dickly"


yeah from the movie umm Coach Carter.. i realized i had the beat after wacthing it the second time n hearing the beat lol
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Old 07-17-05, 03:15 PM   #6
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Listening...

Beat...Nice...I like it...

Dabatos...It was a'ight...the quality was a little hurtin, but it was still a decent verse...I really wasn't feelin' the whole singin thing honestly...But it was still decent, decent flow...just keep ya hed up .

Q...nice verse...I thought your quality was good, nice flow, nice evre overall...keep up the good work...we gotta collab, seriously...

Overall, pretty good track...keep it up...
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Old 07-17-05, 03:17 PM   #7
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I like Dabatos whole "sing songy" thing...dats why I wanted to collab wit him

I agree...quality could be a tad better...but, I think he did well on this verse


good job man


and yea..L.E. we can collab
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Old 07-17-05, 03:32 PM   #8
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listening as i type:

beat is nice..singin is cool..

Dabatos --> i aint feelin your delivery man, sounds like ur straining to rap, ur voice is unnatural soundin i unno feelin ur delivery, ur adlibs after the word is cool when used a couple of times not ova n ova n remove the "chea" adlibs they dnt fit...lyrics r decent u basically stick to the content and cover it well, ur flow is on beat n clarity n quality are str8...id say basicaly jus spit - i think ur spittin like that tryin 2 show emotion, let the emotion come thru naturally homie and ull b str8 4sho keep em comin

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Tha Q--> dam u droppi lik everyday u come in nice...quality is str8...like the first bars wordplay...u rippin this beat 4 sho, ur flow is tight on tha beat...nice multis...couple of times were its obvious where you runnin out breath..otha than that solid verse on this....wanna collab sumtime? pm me if u do..

decent track yall
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Old 07-17-05, 03:47 PM   #9
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I fuck with with the beat I like ya flow and shit and how you ridin the beat and how u spit on it. Ya quality is kinda messed up but its straight, i was feelin the second verse more though, the song is ok though. Just need a lil more improvement with the first verse, but i guess it was coo

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Old 07-17-05, 03:49 PM   #10
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