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Check in by: 07-03-05 at 07:41 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

microcker has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 10:53 PM.

look jameson you don spit flames son
ill shove u thru the hole u came from
yeah its mic rocker i be rockin mics
but this dude is gay he flyin kites
you couldnt be hot if u had a fever
ill cut thru u like a fukkin meat cleaver

bith thin u can win ill murk u again wussup bitch

Jameson has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 03:27 PM.

Should I bother tryna own you or weaken your health,
Bitch, You're wack and your entire verse speaks for itself,
wanted to get high in your minds and picked up a pot habit,
Ask this cat to rock the mic he'll start throwin rocks at it,
This cat is too egotistical for me to even bother with is,
I ain't wack so let this 'bitch do the work' like 'fathering kids'...*

*Some people make the woman do the work when raising kids. So I'm letting him do the work of being wack. Meh.

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Voted For: Jameson

"this dude is gay he flyin kites"?

do gay people enjoy flying kites more than straight people?

anyways, jameson got this easily, he had real punches, witty, first one was pretty funny, haha.....anyways, other dude, way too basic, gotta elevate everywhere, start by developing bettter concepts of punches

v/jameson, rtf

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The Establishment
I am the Batman.

Voted For: Jameson

V/ Jameson...

Verse speaks for itsself

You killed this cat

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Lol @ this battle.................................

Voted For: Jameson

Should I bother tryna own you or weaken your health,
Bitch, You're wack and your entire verse speaks for itself,

MEH, OK...DECENT OPENER I GUESS.

wanted to get high in your minds and picked up a pot habit,
Ask this cat to rock the mic he'll start throwin rocks at it,

NICE NAME PLAY, FUNNY PUNCH.

This cat is too egotistical for me to even bother with is,
I ain't wack so let this 'bitch do the work' like 'fathering kids'...*

MEH OK....

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look jameson you don spit flames son
ill shove u thru the hole u came from

NOPE...

yeah its mic rocker i be rockin mics
but this dude is gay he flyin kites

NO...

you couldnt be hot if u had a fever
ill cut thru u like a fukkin meat cleaver

NO...

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OVERALL, JAMESON GETS IT FOR USING PUNCHLINES...BOTH NEED TO ELEVATOR, BUT J'S SECOND BAR WHORED YOUR WHOLE VERSE!!

NO HATE,

RTF VS VERBAL SHOOTA IN 3 DAYS OR THIS WILL GET REMOVED!!

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uppin.............................................

Voted For: Jameson

my vote goes to jameson.
i can tell both of u all are nebies like me

Jamesom:
Should I bother tryna own you or weaken your health,
Bitch, You're wack and your entire verse speaks for itself,
wanted to get high in your minds and picked up a pot habit,
Ask this cat to rock the mic he'll start throwin rocks at it,
This cat iokay flow s too egotistical for me to even bother with is,
I ain't wack so let this 'bitch do the work' like 'fathering kids'...*

pretty solid flow u had better punches than your opponent u could work on some multies, vocab , and maybe wordplay. structure is okay and personals were to.

microcker
look jameson you don spit flames son
ill shove u thru the hole u came from
yeah its mic rocker i be rockin mics
but this dude is gay he flyin kites
you couldnt be hot if u had a fever
ill cut thru u like a fukkin meat cleaver

okay flow needs work u could better your punches. work on multies, vocab, and wordplay. your structure was okay to . u had personals but they could be better.

can yall repay the favor by droping an honest vote in my battle against slik flo

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nice battle dawg, polllsssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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