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Old 07-08-05, 09:22 PM   #1
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Just Another Person that real shit

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He's just another person tryin to make it happen
delivering his own version of whats defined as rappin x2

Im just another person tryin to make it happen
but once im leave the booth gurantee they wont be laughin
im stackin and mackin heat i gotta stay packin
i got to dawg cuz to me that is rappin
defined to me
cuz a 9 to 5 i aint got no time to be
i gotta live that life someday shine gon see
a bitch cant get in my way she just a dime to me ( just a dime dawg)
see my rhymes the key to unlock the game
all the hataz betta duck when i cock and aim
im tryin to make it better so i could stop this rain
i got ice on the neck so i floss the chain man im off the chain
but still not acknowledged
some say that i should quit and take my ass to college
but really soon yall gon ask for dollars
fuck a class for scholars
i took the class for ballas

Ya boy dope lookin for some feedback

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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 09:27 PM   #2
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uppin................................
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 09:33 PM   #3
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Old 07-08-05, 09:38 PM   #4
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 09:45 PM   #5
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uppin........................
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 09:52 PM   #7
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thank for the feed
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 09:54 PM   #8
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-08-05, 10:03 PM   #9
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someone uppin.............................................
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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Old 07-09-05, 01:11 AM   #10
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this was pretty good, was hopin for better, as messenger said kinda basic, keep it up and elevate
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Old 07-09-05, 01:21 AM   #11
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yeah this was ight sum good shit in here flowed easy nice drop 7/10 keep it up.....................
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Old 07-09-05, 03:10 AM   #12
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thank for the feed
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

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