[verse 1]
Danger Danger, My Verbal Status Opposite Of Anus
A Stranger That'll Hang Ya, Strip U Of Ya Sainess
A Slanguistic Type Of Nigga Dat Niggaz Look Up To
'fortune Of Wheels' Spinnin Be Tha 'vowels 'of Use
'appatite Strong', But Gimmie A Flow And 'i Wont Bite'
Strangle Dickridas In Battles And Leave In Tha Nite
I Got A 'obtuse' Sight, So My Eyes 'move On Measure'
I Gotta 'domination' Type Bitch Dat Loves Tha 'leather'
Slut Im Better At Rippin Tha Mic But For Now Imma Type
Tha Words Dat Come To My Brain, Lyrical Jesus Christ
Call Me Tha 'vibe' Of Tha Flow, But I Deserve 'six Mics'
And If U Aint Offerin Price For Cameos Im So Not Nice
Grab Tha Fuckin Pen And Paper, Let Tha Ink Flow
Im Tha Muthafuckin Black City, Thought U Should Know
When I Do Get Famous And Im In A Position Of Power
Watch Will Be 'chris Tucker', Small Hand Set Tha 'rush Hour'

[hook]
Who Matchin Tha Skills Of Tha City, I Think You Not
Stop Talkin And Listen Up Nigga, Hand Ova Tha Watch
Im More Than Tha Average Emcee, Im Takin Ya Spot
Move Me Up In Tha Muthafuckin Ranks, Nigga Im Hot
-repeat 2x-

[verse 2]
Even Witta 'bulletproof Cloth' U Cant Stop 'bullet Showers'
I'll Leave U Cryin And 'assed Out' Like A Damn Prince Concert
Its Hard To Believe Dat I Jus Started And Now I Cant Stop
Sumbody Cut Tha Fuckin Ac On Now, Nigga I Said Im Hot!
Kick Thru Tha Door To Lyrical Heaven, U Neva Heard Me Before
But When I Finally Bust A Flow, I Bet U'll Be Beggin For More
Jus Like A Whore Yall Hit Tha Floor, Grabbin For Drawls
But Yall Gotta Slow Down, Let My Fuckin Zipper Pass My Balls
Im A 'outlaw' But Not 'after Pac' Im After Dat Nigga Jay-z
To Gain As Much Power And Controll As He Did Before Me
Spit Tha 'bone Hard' Bars, Dat'll Make Tha Strongest Knees Weak
Gimmie Tha Crown, I Need To Be Promoted Now To Tha King
So Stop Tha Bullshit Flow Dat U Be Kickin, Peep My Intuition
I Be Spittin Ova Instrumentals Dat You Aint Got And U Wishin
Dat Tha Nigga Black City Would Give A Chance For A Collab
I Might Consider, But If You Aint As Nice As Me, Kiss My Ass!

[hook]
Who Matchin Tha Skills Of Tha City, I Think You Not
Stop Talkin And Listen Up Nigga, Hand Ova Tha Watch
Im More Than Tha Average Emcee, Im Takin Ya Spot
Move Me Up In Tha Muthafuckin Ranks, Nigga Im Hot!!!!!
-repeat 2x-

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left feed in "Unwanted Pain"

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daaawg............. that's sum good shit

vocab, flow, structure..... multi's!!!!!!!!
you got em nice shit and fo been a good first droppin I thinks its a 10/10 na' mean?

man good structure n creativity... perfect... LOL

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Bizzacckkk

good lookin fam...uppin

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Iight decent piece here...Punches were ok, but coulda been better

Vocab needs to be upped, wordplay was decent, flow was good

6/10

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thanx a lot fam...uppin

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Decent shit, for ure first OM......its hot...7/10...structure was very good....multies on point....wud be a sick audio

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it will be audio tomarrow cuz i decided to re word it and lay it down...didnt realize how hot it is till a hour ago...thanx fam...upps

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make sure u pm me with the link for the audio aiite nigga

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this was horrible OM... okay dude... dont do PUNCHES... these are lyrics to a song more than anything... they are horrible for a topical OM...
the structure was good... vocab didnt really make the peace anymore intelligent like its supposed too... over all, nota HORRIBLE VERSE... ill give that to ya... but do this into an audio or something...

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