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Old 07-09-05, 08:08 AM   #1
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Diss To Animosity

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DISS TO ANIMOSITY

ANIMOSITY your plan is an atrocity you stand with curiosity
Knowing your velocity is slow and like cheap oil your viscosity
Boil under heat so you can’t toil and thunder streets with stamina
You poke and jab but a joke with vocab so your grammar
Has no glamour you spit the verbs of nerds stuff don’t hammer
Microphones like Mike Jones your type gone with the wind
Like Clark Gable you don’t spark fable, heart not able to blend
My friend, you only glitter with yuppies even with a litter
Of puppies you bark long, art wrong can’t uplift this critter
Need stronger juice you no longer produce good rhymes
Should resign as the man who never prospered with his lines
I offer you hope but you came softer with quote best accept
My help then step with pride, missed the appointment overslept
You need practice don’t front whackness is up this month
Look never test a winner you can only be a guest at my dinner
Best wipe feets before you enter
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Old 07-11-05, 10:38 PM   #2
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dis was a good diss u had nice punches and good structure ya vocab was good you ya lines were creative the last line doe kinda messes it up but overall i give it 8/10
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Old 07-11-05, 10:56 PM   #3
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Old 07-11-05, 11:31 PM   #4
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