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Old 07-06-05, 11:59 AM   #1
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::First Up We Have 'The Queen Of Wordplay And Creativety'::

Artik Phrost
...Phrost Surpasses The Very Flight Of Hype...Herbs Get Spliced With Knifes
A Nyce Crew? So Ya Get Passage Rites?..Ha!..But, So Many 'Dick Ride'; Its Redundant To Say 'Get A Grip On Life'!!..

...So I Stay Releasin Humid Fluids..Saliva Glands Dipped In Acidic Blue Prints
'Futuristically Fluent'; A Style Of 'Irish Sorcery'..Cuz Everything You've Ever Thought Of I Already 'Drew-It/Druid'!!..

...Come In Cussin..Fist Soaked In Lysol; Guarantees Herbs A Fresh Concussion
Phrost Aint Dope?..I'll 'Crack Ya Skull Down The Middle' And Literally Leave That 'Thought Open For Discussion'!!..

...AP A Rhyme Master Mind..On One Finger She Balances A Mass Of Minds
The Knife'll Lunge An' Gash Ya Spine..Run Wit Phrost? I'l Leave Ya 'Prayin To Dig Up That Fortune' Like A Mast At Mines!!..

...I Cast Iron Through Ions, With The Very Style Yu Got Yur Eye-On
Is What Yu'll Die From; So Like 'Riddin Of Those Of Like Both Sexes'...Lets Let Bi-Gones Be Bi-Gones!!..

...A Profound Glory With My-Story; Tippin Rikters So Even The Blind Hear Me
Artik Fear Thee?!..Please!..'Reading A Mystery In Steam Rooms' Is The Only Time Ya Myst-Erie!!..

...All The While Yu've Hated My Style; And Rather've Taken The Easy Way Out
So I'll Scale A Clip To Ya Mouths...And Like 'Eric Wrights Coroner'...We'll See Just How E-Z Wieghs Out!!..

...I Push A Hard Bargain...Its Just Gotten Started; So Watch A Heart Reign
Over Taders(traitors) And Crews; I'll Trade-Off For Audio Tools While Ya'll Still Tryna Get A Bar-Gain!!..



::Next Up We Have A Man Who Specializes In....Well, Just See For Ya Self::

Criminal
The Impulse-to-Charge-breaks Pulses-and-heart-rates until the Man-Connects-to-Monitors
I’ll battle you AND ya site, “killing TWO beefs at once” like “Ambidextrous-Slaughterers”
If you was “level headed” you’d know what “Level-you-was-Headin-too”
Cuz like “Arabian Nights” there’s “1001 stories” between us before this is Settled-through-aggressive-Moves…
So with THAT said, before ya conquest of combat, you Better-Dig-ya-Graves
Because you’ll surely die, you’ve got “more levels to pass” than “Never-Ending-Games”
ya make diss verses, then within Minutes criminal MURDERS It
Because unlike “the goose with golden eggs” ya Spittin Isn’t “WORTH a Shit”
Only “scripts” as “hard and scary” as mine are those on tombstones in Cemetery’s-at-Night
R.V verse consisted of “poor grammar, women and crime”, Yep!, some of ya style Fits-the-Stereotype
Don’t think I can’t digest the hate from yall when I EAT-Haters-for-TWO-Reasons
For 1, you’re “not as sick”, and 2 you “don’t have a shot” like Teenagers-in-Flu-Season!!
When the Troops went to war you were FULL of remorse when they Captured-Hussein...
cuz like him, you was “gassed up” and then had a “war brought on you” like Iraq-and-Kuwait!!
So Pack-ya-Suit-Case, door’s CLOSIN so tell me how “shit turns out” when the “Door-Knob’s-in-ya-Ass”
Too easy, the fun of the Hunt’s gone like “ancient games” because the “Sport’s-Lost-in-the-Past”
Ya trash is talked “Loud and Stuttered”, son you need to “Speak-Lower-and-don’t-Stammer”
Cuz you “proud of WEAK flows” like Creek-Owners-with-Low-Standards”____ EASY!!!
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Old 07-06-05, 11:59 AM   #2
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Old 07-06-05, 01:51 PM   #3
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this was cool you both had crazy multies but i thought at time you both came to complex like you lost me or all the detail led to nothing but still flexing alot of rhyming skills keep it up
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Old 07-06-05, 07:49 PM   #4
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yo u try hard & force 2 much wordplay & ur linez r stretched, but i wuznt feelin da rhymez in diz, both wuz str8 keep it up
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Old 07-07-05, 10:05 AM   #5
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shit was sick, nice drop MA!
cool collabo,

and its multis and punches for me basicly
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Old 07-07-05, 11:12 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by KhAoZ ThEoRy
yo u try hard & force 2 much wordplay & ur linez r stretched, but i wuznt feelin da rhymez in diz, both wuz str8 keep it up

^so....its not audio....thats how i key....
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Old 07-07-05, 12:48 PM   #7
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*doesn't know how and why she is in here but decides she'll feed for the heck of it...*

Nice piece here, kept dropping hot with the wordplay turning it into punches, nice vocab you used, multis were there, flow was aight. Criminal dude dropped nicely too but I like Phrost's style a bit more. Both had nice level of consistency, dropping hot punches filled with wordplay and witty shit ya kno.

Solid one!
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Old 07-08-05, 11:49 AM   #8
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bumpity....bumps....
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Old 07-08-05, 11:57 AM   #9
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*doesn't know how and why she is in here but decides she'll feed for the heck of it...*

Nice piece here, kept dropping hot with the wordplay turning it into punches, nice vocab you used, multis were there, flow was aight. Criminal dude dropped nicely too but I like Phrost's style a bit more. Both had nice level of consistency, dropping hot punches filled with wordplay and witty shit ya kno.

Solid one!



no dout good looking on the feed,
it will only improve my skills
upp'in for more feed back
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Old 07-14-05, 02:28 PM   #10
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...leave links and i will feed
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Old 07-14-05, 03:53 PM   #11
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Old 07-14-05, 03:55 PM   #12
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Some cats on the block swindling while their stocks dwindling
Need staff instruction indicted on graft and corruption now spindling
Stay in jail no one to pay the bale didn’t parade smart and minimal now
Trademark of a criminal, his mind keen with some desire but somehow
Got caught up in machine gunfire

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199778)

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Old 07-14-05, 04:31 PM   #13
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can we get real feed back dawg danm.....
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